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Both reading and listening are talking about elephants.

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Both reading and listening are talking about elephants. Whereas the reading gives three beliefs about the elephants, the listening challange these beliefs by mention that there is misunderstanding, then the listening cast doubt on each point. First, according to the passage, the elephants are aware of approaching death, accordingly, they leave the herds and going to die near the water, which also know as elephant graveyards. However, the professor explains the elephant behavior of goning near to the water is to find soft grace, because when they get old, their teeth become weak. The elephants stay there until they died. Secondly, the author posits that elephants are the only animal that can produce art representing the worlds around them. On the other hand, the lecturer refuts this by saying that if they trained to draw a line, this could not mean that they are aware that this line is flower or animal. Simply they are trained by their trainer to do some pruch moves, when they strock them on their sensitive ears. Finally, the article contends that ther is a recent experiment that prove the frar of the elephants from mice. In this experiment, herds of elephants backed away when they confronted with mice. The professor challange this point by saying that it is normal to br afriad of unfamilair animal. In the zoo, elephants are not afriad of mice because ther are around them and familar.
Both reading and listening are talking about
elephants
. Whereas the reading gives three beliefs about the
elephants
, the listening
challange
these beliefs by mention that there is misunderstanding, then the listening cast doubt on each point.

First
, according to the passage, the
elephants
are aware of approaching death,
accordingly
, they
leave
the herds and going to
die
near the water, which
also
know
as
elephant
graveyards.
However
, the professor
explains
the
elephant
behavior of
goning
near to the water is to find soft grace,
because
when they
get
old
, their teeth become weak. The
elephants
stay there until they
died
.

Secondly
, the author posits that
elephants
are the
only
animal that can produce art representing
the worlds around them
.
On the other hand
, the lecturer
refuts
this by saying that if they trained to draw a line, this could not mean that they are aware that this line is flower or animal.
Simply
they
are trained
by their trainer to do
some
pruch
moves
, when they
strock
them on their sensitive ears.

Finally
, the article contends that
ther
is a recent experiment that prove the
frar
of the
elephants
from mice. In this experiment, herds of
elephants
backed away when they confronted with mice. The professor
challange
this point by saying that it is normal to
br
afriad
of
unfamilair
animal. In the zoo,
elephants
are not
afriad
of mice
because
ther are
around them and
familar
.
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IELTS essay Both reading and listening are talking about elephants.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
237 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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