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SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO BUY INTERNATIONAL PRODUCTS WHILE OTHERS PREFER TO BUY LOCAL PRODUCTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

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Goods bought locally and internationally both have many advantages. Hence, a few individuals may either be fond of local items while some go for imported goods. I completely agree on buying internationally made products as it gives out a fresh taste of fashion and diversity. To begin with, imported items are always trendsetting. More often than not, imported designs are comfortable and trendy. Captivating the interest of the society with its unique sense of ideas. Whether you are sporting winter or summer attires, they have outfits for every occasion that make individuals stand out from the norm. To illustrate, the increasing demand for Forever21 modern and casual looks paves its way to open their new branch in Dubai. Therefore, some people prefer imported outfits because they are fashionable. Another point to consider is that internationally made products provide a variety of choices. Indulging everyone with its limitless options. Since these products are imported from different parts of the world, consumers can buy a variety of food products, perfumes, clothes, cosmetics, furniture, electronics and accessories that are manufactured from different countries. Additionally, this offers everyone a chance to practice, understand and enjoy the culture of other nations. For instance, The Korean craze has become a trend from their eye-catching dramas to their mouthwatering dishes that most stores from all over the world now offer korean products and cuisines. To sum up, some individuals prefer these international commodities as it opens limitless choices and world class experience. To recapitulate, Some people prefer imported products as these are stylish and diversified.

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