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nowadays more and more jobs are done by machines rather than humans... Is this development is more advantageous or more disadvantageous

nowadays more and more jobs are done by machines rather than humans. . . Is this development is more advantageous or more disadvantageous Jln7D
Its is universal evidence that human has developed machines for the better and easiness of it own work. This essay intend to analysis the the use of machines are much more that humans in any job. I personally believe in above topic pros overcome the cones. On the positive side machinery are invented by man for faster completion of work. In ancient times apes generated the need of tools for various activities. As apes converted to intelligent human beings similarly tools were replaces by machines. Initially in rural areas this simple machines were operated for faster production, as this machines help this rural area to develop into urban civilizations. Now a days this machines has becomes super computers which has capacity to operate own ita own and can develop a jobs in huge quantum, with high level of accuracy and without error. Advance Machines like super computers, robots etc have proved the ultimate creation of human being and still futher proving in the field of medicals, aviation, engineering, Aronotical, farming etc. On other side as the development took place in use of machines by human, it had adverse effect by creating dependency day by day. This dependency have increase so much that once human use to control machines but now a days machines are operating human being. Initially to cultivate and harvest the crops lost of human involvement was required, but now a day human are replaced by machines and only one man can complete the process. Just like farming situation early almost all the fields are taken over by machines replacing the humans. Human invention like machine, super computers, robots etc have helped us to bring our imagination to live. It is undoubted that machines can work faster, error free etc but to operate a machine human being is required. We need to be much more skill full to operate this machines if not so this will be disadvantaged for humans. To conclude this we should accept that machines are becoming more powerful and faster that human to compete in the race human shall be act according.
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has developed
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machines
for the better and easiness of it
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own
work.
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to analysis
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machines
are much more that
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humans
in any job. I
personally
believe in above topic pros overcome the cones.

On the
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positive
side machinery
are invented
by
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man
for
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faster
completion of work. In ancient times apes generated the need of tools for various activities.
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As
apes converted to intelligent
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human
beings
similarly
tools were replaces by
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machines
.
Initially
in rural areas this simple
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machines
were operated
for
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faster
production, as this
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machines
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help
this rural area to develop into urban civilizations.
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Now a days
this
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machines
has becomes super computers which has capacity to operate
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own
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ita
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and can develop a jobs in huge quantum, with high level of accuracy and without error. Advance
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Machines
like super computers, robots etc have proved the ultimate creation of
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human
being and
still
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futher
proving in the field of medicals, aviation, engineering,
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Aronotical
, farming etc.

On other side as the development took place in
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of
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machines
by
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human
, it had adverse effect by creating dependency day by day. This dependency have increase
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so
much that once
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human
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use to
control
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machines
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but
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now a days
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machines
are operating
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human
being.
Initially
to cultivate and harvest the crops lost of
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human
involvement
was required
,
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but
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now
a day
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human
are replaced
by
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machines
and
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only
one
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man
can complete the process.
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Just
like farming situation early almost all the fields
are taken
over by
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machines
replacing the humans.

Human invention like
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machine
, super computers, robots etc have
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helped
us to bring our imagination to
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live
. It
is undoubted
that
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machines
can work
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faster
, error free etc
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but
to operate a
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machine
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human
being
is required
. We need to be much more
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skill
full to operate this
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machines
if not
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so
this will
be disadvantaged
for humans.

To conclude
this we should accept that
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machines
are becoming more powerful and
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faster
that
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human
to compete in the race
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human
shall be
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act
according.

IELTS essay nowadays more and more jobs are done by machines rather than humans. . . Is this development is more advantageous or more disadvantageous

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  American English
5 paragraphs
348 words
5.0
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