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Some people prefer sending me a switch while other prefer making phone calls directly which one do you prefer

Some people prefer sending me a switch while other prefer making phone calls directly which one do you prefer nRYKn
everyone has their style of communicating with their handphones such as calling or Messaging. For me, it depends on the situation. Sometimes people can’t talk because of work, or driving, or eating at a restaurant. texting gives people privacy when they are in public places. Texting gives me time to think. it is easier than calling. You can say what you want without having to really think about it. I hate talking on the phone. I don't like the sound of my own voice and I am never sure what to say on a phone call. When I read a text it is much easier for me to remember the information, because it's a graphic message.
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everyone
has their style of communicating with their
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handphones
such as calling or Messaging. For me, it depends on the situation.
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Sometimes
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people
can’t talk
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because
of work, or driving, or eating at a restaurant.
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texting
gives
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people
privacy when they are in public places. Texting gives me time to
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think
.
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it
is easier than calling. You can say what you want without having to
really
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think
about it. I hate talking on the phone. I don't like the sound of my
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own
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voice and
I am never sure what to say on a phone call. When I read a text it is much easier for me to remember the information,
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because
it's a graphic message.

IELTS essay Some people prefer sending me a switch while other prefer making phone calls directly which one do you prefer

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  American English
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116 words
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