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Do you think it is important for parents to teach their kids to learn how to manage muny . Use reserves and that specific examples to support your opinion.

Do you think it is important for parents to teach their kids to learn how to manage muny. Use reserves and that specific examples to support your opinion. 8aYmV
i think that it is very importent thing that parents must teach their kids to learn how to manage money. children learn more about finances from their parents than any other source. The education starts at home and the things learned from early childhood become part of someone's personality and characteristics. You should teach your children to handle money in the same way you teach them to bathe and brush teeth—as a necessary skill for life. Helping your kids understand the value of money can be a difficult task
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learn more about finances from their parents than any other source. The education
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at home and the things learned from early childhood become part of someone's personality and characteristics. You should teach your children to handle money
in the same way
you teach them to bathe and brush teeth—as a necessary
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skill
for life. Helping your kids understand the value of money can be a difficult
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IELTS essay Do you think it is important for parents to teach their kids to learn how to manage muny. Use reserves and that specific examples to support your opinion.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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