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Describe last Holiday that I went

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In Last winter, I went to city. It was very interesting. I went to seaside, collected Shells and beautiful and small stone in the beach. I saved them in a vase but my cousin brock it, so I put them in a another vase. I was in holiday for three days. In the morning, I went to seaside and play with sand. After had launch I went to walking in a park. At the afternoon, I drank tea in the beach. I play with toys in park at night. Also, I had a city break, I went to a modern shopping center, but I didn't buy anything because it was very expensive.

In Last winter, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to city. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 interesting. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to seaside, collected Shells and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stone in the beach. I saved them in a vase This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my cousin Possible spelling mistake found.BrockrockblockRockbrickbrook
brock
 it, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I put them in Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 another vase. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was in holiday for three days. In the morning, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to seaside and play with sand. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "launched".launched
launch
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to walking in a park. At the afternoon, I drank tea in the beach. I play with toys in park at night. Also
, I had a city break, I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to a modern shopping center, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 anything This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 expensive. 