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Some People prefer online classes, while others think that it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.1

Some People prefer online classes, while others think that it is better to be in a traditional classroom. v. 1
It is not always essential, to tell the truth, as there are situations where lying would be a better decision. Although telling the fact is what people pursue as an honourable tradition, I agree that untruth provides the best solutions on some circumstances. The strongest justification for lying is that they are regularly done for sympathy and goodwill. There are occasions in life on which people have to conceal part of the truth or even twist facts. For instance, many patients being diagnosed with cancers receive encouragement from doctors, which say that they will be certainly recovered from their illness. In those circumstances, the falsehood can be used as a placebo to give the patient a peaceful frame of mind, thereby participating in treatment activities. Although falsehood appears to be morally wrong at first sight, it is indeed the right ethical thing to do. Another excuse for not being truthful all the time is because white lies are harmless and can be socially beneficial. For example, sometimes people tell a lie to prioritize another person’s feelings over truthfulness. If someone cooks something on their own just for you, and it just doesn’t taste good then perhaps it’s better to lie and say it tastes good. Since our childhood, we have been taught to spare others’ feelings, rather than speaking the straightforward certainty that can hurt others’ feelings. However, While telling a lie is accepted or even recommended in some situations, Honesty is still a virtue that we should all embrace. There is little doubt that a man who is known for his candour is more likely to earn respect than a man lying habitually. In conclusion, although honesty is still being regarded as a core virtue in many traditions, telling a lie is accepted or even recommended in some situations.
It is not always essential, to
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tell
the truth, as there are situations where lying would be a better decision. Although telling the fact is what
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people
pursue as an
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honourable
tradition, I
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agree
that untruth provides the best solutions on
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some
circumstances.

The strongest justification for lying is that they are
regularly
done for sympathy and goodwill. There are occasions in life on which
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people
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have to
conceal part of the truth or even twist facts.
For instance
,
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many
patients
being diagnosed
with cancers receive encouragement from doctors, which say that they will be
certainly
recovered from their illness. In those circumstances, the falsehood can be
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used
as a placebo to give the patient a peaceful frame of mind, thereby participating in treatment activities. Although falsehood appears to be
morally
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wrong
at
first
sight, it is
indeed
the right ethical thing to do.

Another excuse for not being truthful all the time is
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because
white lies are harmless and can be
socially
beneficial.
For example
,
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sometimes
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people
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tell
a
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lie
to prioritize another person’s feelings over truthfulness. If someone cooks something on their
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own
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just
for you, and it
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doesn’t taste
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good
then perhaps it’s better to
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lie
and say it tastes
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good
. Since our childhood, we have
been taught
to spare others’ feelings,
rather
than speaking the straightforward certainty that can hurt others’ feelings.

However
, While telling a
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lie
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
or even recommended in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
situations, Honesty is
still
a virtue that we should all embrace. There is
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little
doubt that a
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man
who
is known
for his
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candour
is more likely to earn respect than a
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man
lying
habitually
.

In conclusion
, although honesty is
still
being regarded
as a core virtue in
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many
traditions, telling a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lie
is
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accepted
or even recommended in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
situations.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some People prefer online classes, while others think that it is better to be in a traditional classroom. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
300 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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