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Some people like to eat most of their meals with other people. Others prefer eating most of their meals alone. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v.1

Some people like to eat most of their meals with other people. Others prefer eating most of their meals alone. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 1
The homes are the most indispensable aspect of any human being. They provide essentially the shelter and an area where the human can stay safely. Many people have the opinion that building owners are responsible for the assurance standards of a building. In this essay, the reasons why both builders and government are equally responsible for the security of the building are discussed. The builder is completely responsible for the architecture of a building. The architecture of the building should be selected in such a way that it includes protection standards. For instance, when the blueprint of a building is created, the necessary exit-path in case of fire should be reserved. The architectural design of a building is decided by the builder. Therefore, the builder must be more inclined to bring risk-free features of the building. Once the building is ready and occupied by people, the government must make necessary arrangements for safety. Since the government is authorized to develop assurance features in and around the building, the government is also responsible for the safety of a building. For example, a fire brigade unit can be established by the government near a major residential area so the fire extinguisher unit can reach on time. Several security features are developed by the government to provide welfare. In conclusion, in my opinion, both the government and the builder are equally responsible for the safety standard of a building. If a builder performs his tasks correctly by providing all welfare features, then the building will be a protected place to stay. The government also has a role by establishing necessary features around the building to ensure the well-being of individuals. In this essay, the builders are responsible for architectural design, and the government is authorized to establish outsider features are discussed.
The homes are the most indispensable aspect of any human being. They provide
essentially
the shelter and an area where the human can stay
safely
.
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Many
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people
have the opinion that
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building
owners are
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responsible
for the assurance standards of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
. In this essay, the reasons why both
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builders
and
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government
are
equally
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responsible
for the security of the
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building
are discussed
.

The
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builder
is completely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsible
for the architecture of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
. The architecture of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
should
be selected
in such a way that it includes protection standards.
For instance
, when the blueprint of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
is created
, the necessary exit-path in case of fire should
be reserved
. The architectural design of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
is decided
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
builder
.
Therefore
, the
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builder
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be more inclined to bring
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
-free features of the building.

Once the
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building
is ready and occupied by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, the
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government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
necessary arrangements for safety. Since the
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government
is authorized
to develop assurance features in and around the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
, the
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government
is
also
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responsible
for the safety of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
.
For example
, a fire brigade unit can
be established
by the
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government
near a major residential area
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so
the fire extinguisher unit can reach on time. Several security features
are developed
by the
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government
to provide welfare.

In conclusion
, in my opinion, both the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
builder
are
equally
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsible
for the safety standard of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
. If a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
builder
performs his tasks
correctly
by providing all welfare features, then the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
will be a protected place to stay. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
also
has a role by establishing necessary features around the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
building
to ensure the well-being of individuals. In this essay, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
builders
are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
responsible
for architectural design, and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
is authorized
to establish outsider features
are discussed
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people like to eat most of their meals with other people. Others prefer eating most of their meals alone. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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