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Some people hold the view that hiring a friend to work for them is really beneficial. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons and examples from your reading, experience or observations to support your point of view.

Some people hold the view that hiring a friend to work for them is really beneficial. with this opinion? Give reasons and examples from your reading, experience or observations to support your point of view. 8Gaxk
Building a career and owning a company by ourselves, people usually tend to hire our friends to join hands and carry out the work with them. Some individuals would think that can be a significant way to promote our work because friends are those we trusted the most. On the contrary, I don’t consider this is a prominent manner to put our company in a new level of competitive business environment.
Building a career and owning a
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tend to hire our friends to
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hands and carry out the work with them.
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individuals would
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that can be a significant way to promote our work
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friends are those we trusted the most.
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in a new level of competitive business environment.

IELTS essay Some people hold the view that hiring a friend to work for them is really beneficial. with this opinion? Give reasons and examples from your reading, experience or observations to support your point of view.

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