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Fastfood is becoming one part of everyonelife ,it has negative effects on lifestyle and diet ,do u agree or not ?

Fastfood is becoming one part of everyonelife, it has negative effects on lifestyle and diet, do u agree or not? Dq6a7
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that, nowadays majority of people have formed habit of eating junk food on regular basis or at some intervals. However, some are believe that this habit will exert adverse influence on individuals lifestyle as well as on nutrition. If questioned, i firmly agree with this statement. My preference is explained further in ensuing paragraphs. Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantiate this concept. The top notch concrete is that being on fast food diet enables citizens to live relatively convenient and easier lifestyle. To illustrates this, in this recent time, people confronted themselves in to serious competitions. As a result, they ought to extra hours in order to meet their deadlines. subsisting eating junk food at restaurants matches their daily routine better, since this can extricate themselves to trouble of making snack at home, which allow individuals to do more focus on their projects. For instance, hospitality of Uk has shown that 70% people rely on this prepared foods as they ought to spend extra hours on work. Furthermore, Another rationale which hauls me to patron is that this dietarary habit tend to number of dangerous diseases such as diabetes, cardiovascular, obesity and so on. As these cuisines made with law quality ingredients. such as oil that causes blockage of nerve which indirectly lead to the heart attack. For example, recently USA reaseach has revealed that 60% of people are suffering from many fatal illness as they have a unusual dietary habits. On the contrary, homemade foods have their own merits. As these meals are made with fresh vegetables and fruits, which are abundence in vitamins and nutrients. Therefore, having these kind of food could prevent serious health problems. To recapitulate, it is indeed true that, fast foods play a indispensable part of folks lives. no dought it can make people life easy but it also has detrimental impact on people livelihood.
In this concurrent world, it is
undoubtedly
true that, nowadays majority of
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people
have formed
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habit
of eating junk
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food
on regular basis or at
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some
intervals.
However
,
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some
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are
believe that this
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habit
will exert adverse influence on
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individuals
lifestyle
as well
as on nutrition. If questioned,
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i
firmly
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agree
with this statement. My preference is
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explained
further
in ensuing paragraphs. Adequate evidence are obtainable to substantiate this concept. The
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top notch
concrete is that being on
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fast
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food
diet enables citizens to
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live
relatively
convenient and easier lifestyle. To illustrates this, in this recent time,
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people
confronted themselves in to serious competitions.
As a result
, they ought to extra hours in order to
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meet
their deadlines.
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subsisting
eating junk
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food
at restaurants matches their daily routine better, since this can extricate themselves to trouble of making snack at home, which
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allow
individuals to do more focus on their projects.
For instance
, hospitality of
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Uk
has shown that 70%
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people
rely on this prepared
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foods
as they ought to spend extra hours on work.
Furthermore
, Another rationale which hauls me to patron is that this
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dietarary
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habit
tend to number of
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dangerous
diseases such as diabetes, cardiovascular, obesity and
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so
on.
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As
these cuisines made with law quality ingredients.
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such
as oil that causes blockage of nerve which
indirectly
lead to the heart attack.
For example
, recently USA
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reaseach
has revealed that 60% of
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people
are suffering from
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many
fatal illness as they have
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a
unusual dietary
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habits
.
On the contrary
, homemade
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foods
have their
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own
merits. As these meals
are made
with fresh vegetables and fruits, which are
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abundence
in vitamins and nutrients.
Therefore
, having
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these kind
of
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food
could
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prevent
serious health problems. To recapitulate, it is
indeed
true that,
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fast
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foods
play
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a
indispensable part of folks
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lives
.
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no
dought it can
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make
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people
life easy
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but
it
also
has detrimental impact on
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people
livelihood.
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IELTS essay Fastfood is becoming one part of everyonelife, it has negative effects on lifestyle and diet, do u agree or not?

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