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Some people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public skill is really important Give reasons Some people say public speaking should be taught at school Do you agree or disagree v.2

Some people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public skill is really important Give reasons Some people say public speaking should be taught at school v. 2
" A good communication skill. shows a person' s inner personality and intelligency" . No doubt, Politicians have a zeal and practice beyond their good speeches. But, here is a topic that although, it is essential but not easy to speak in front of lots of people; should this skill be taught at school or not. I am totally agreed with the statement and shall explicate some reasons for this trend in the following paragraphs. First of all, public skill is very important for every one. The reason for believing this is that it improve a person' s communication skill and as we know that school is the building block of a person' s life. For imstance, 90% of schools in India started to give a separate class of public skill so that students will not find any difficulty whenever they will have to speak in front of audiences. Second of all, it is often said that to become politics one need good public skills. and, skill should be taught at school because a politician get name and fame after taking education from school. So, schools should emphasize on practical skills rather than theoretical skills. A good illustration of this could be India' s prime minister who claimed that before taking his designation. He has to take classes to speak in front of audiences but rather than taking classes it will beneficial for students to be taught about public skill in school. All in all, . I believe that it is very difficult to talk in front of people but, it would become easy when school authorities take an action to promote students to speak in front for audiences with extra curriculam activities.
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people
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some
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person&
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person&
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in India
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that students will not find any difficulty whenever they will
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said that to become politics one need
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skills
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school
.
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should emphasize on practical
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. A
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illustration of this could be
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#039; s prime minister who claimed that
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before
taking his designation. He
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speak
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front
of audiences
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but
rather
than taking classes it will beneficial for students to
be taught
about
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public
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skill
in school.

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but
, it would become easy when
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school
authorities take an action to promote students to
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speak
in
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front
for audiences with extra
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curriculam
activities.
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IELTS essay Some people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public skill is really important Give reasons Some people say public speaking should be taught at school v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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