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some people feel that the effect of advertising are positive while others think they are negative.Discuss both views and give your own idea.

some people feel that the effect of advertising are positive while others think they are negative. 2PA0x
It is claimed that advertising has many advantages for companies while others disagree with this point of view. I believe that, it is noticible advantages like benefit to costumers as well as clients, can previal of it is unsignificant disadvantages. To start with, advertisment is a key for businessmen to successful business and for client can offer varity of products. It is common to manage a business among all age group of people these days. All of succeded business people do not stop saying about the help of adds in bussines. Radio, internet, networking sites, advertisment boards, television-all of them can help to introduse product. The more viewers advertisement has, the more income from business can be recieved. Moreover, not only costumers benefit from it, but also and clients. By the advertisement they can see a lot of products, so people may make choice by sorfing all of add and selecting suitable for them and best for their income. However, it can be seen too much adds at street as a result there may be atraction unnecesery to products and as well as disatisfiction on choice that pearson made. There are a lot of advertisements and not all of them are useful. People see them everywhere as a result they feel stressed. Someone, for example is going to buy a washing machine, but in a market there are different types of them. At this time, clients can see atractive advertising of not helpful machine, which can result in wrong decition. Furthemore, after buying some product and seeing beter one in advertisment can lead to the disatisfaction of bought product. For example, women buys dress in a market, and later sees it on online shopping sites in a chipper price, so there might me not full satisfiction to the bought one. In conclusion, dispite some not noticable disadvanrages like, negative atraction and disatisfiction, advertisement remains with full of advantages
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that advertising has
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advantages for
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companies
while others disagree with this point of view. I believe that, it is
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noticible
advantages like benefit to costumers
as well
as
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clients
, can
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previal
of it is
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unsignificant
disadvantages. To
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start
with,
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advertisment
is a key for businessmen to successful
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business
and for
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client
can offer
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varity
of
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products
. It is common to manage a
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business
among all age group of
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people
these days. All of
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succeded
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business
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people
do not
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stop
saying about the
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help
of
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adds
in
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bussines
. Radio, internet, networking sites,
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advertisment
boards, television-all of them can
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help
to
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introduse
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product
. The more
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viewers
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advertisement
has, the more income from
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business
can be
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recieved
.
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, not
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only
costumers benefit from it,
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but
also
and
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clients
. By the
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advertisement
they can
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see
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a lot of
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products
,
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so
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people
may
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make
choice by
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sorfing
all of
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add
and selecting suitable for them and best for their income.
However
, it can be
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seen
too much
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adds
at street
as a result
there may be
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atraction
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unnecesery
to
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products
and
as well
as
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disatisfiction
on choice that
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pearson
made. There are
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a lot of
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advertisements
and not all of them are useful.
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People
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see
them everywhere
as a result
they feel
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stressed
. Someone,
for example
is going to
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buy
a washing machine,
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but
in a market there are
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different
types of them. At this time,
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clients
can
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see
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atractive
advertising of not helpful machine, which can result in
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wrong
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decition
.
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Furthemore
, after buying
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some
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product
and seeing
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beter
one in
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advertisment
can lead to the
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disatisfaction
of
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bought
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product
.
For example
, women
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buys
dress in a market, and later
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sees
it on online shopping sites in a chipper price,
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so
there might me not full
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satisfiction
to the
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bought
one.
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,
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dispite
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some
not
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noticable
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disadvanrages
like,
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negative
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atraction
and
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disatisfiction
,
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advertisement
remains with full of
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advantages
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IELTS essay some people feel that the effect of advertising are positive while others think they are negative.

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