Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

If you could change one thing in your society, what would you change and why?

If you could change one thing in your society, what would you change and why? QMbYb

Nigeria. A third-world country grappling with chronic corruption, crippling poverty, and the highest rate of out-of-school children in the world. No problem enrages me more about this tragic reality, than the suffering endured by impoverished people, who have no access to empowering opportunities. Hence, I aim to provide that opportunity– through education. By teaching people how to solve problems around them, I recognize that I can make a tremendous impact in my community. Consequently, I seek to contribute to the free quality education of children across Nigeria, transforming its educational narrative. My motivation for fulfilling this vision is simple: at least 4 in 10 children aged 6-11 in Nigeria are out of school. That’s 10. 5 million bright futures– robbed of the possibility of coming to fruition. I want to provide a chance for underprivileged children to take control of their future - and not forever be subjugated to the consequences of adverse financial and socio-economic conditions. Given the opportunity to receive a quality education, these children can rise and tackle issues around them, effecting social change in their communities. I am determined to be the catalyst for this change. “If you give a man a fish, you feed him for a day. If you teach a man to fish you feed him for a lifetime. ”- Chinese philosopher, Lao Tzu. I ardently seek to feed generations of Nigerians to come for lifetimes far beyond mine– by giving those before them the key to unlocking their collective future- our collective future: education.

Nigeria. A third-world country grappling with chronic corruption, crippling poverty, and the highest rate of out-of-school You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 in the world. No problem enrages me more about this tragic reality, than the suffering endured by impoverished This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, who have no access to empowering opportunities. Hence
, I aim to provide that opportunity– through You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
. By teaching This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 how to solve problems around them, I recognize that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a tremendous impact in my community. Consequently
, I seek to contribute to the free quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 across Nigeria, transforming its educational narrative.

My motivation for fulfilling this vision is simple: at least 4 in 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 aged 6-11 in Nigeria are out of school. That’s 10. 5 million bright You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
futures–
 robbed of the possibility of coming to fruition. I want to provide a chance for underprivileged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 to take control of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 and not forever be subjugated
 to the consequences of adverse financial and Possible spelling mistake found.socioeconomic
socio-economic
 conditions. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 the opportunity to receive a quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 can rise and tackle issues around them, effecting social This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in their communities. I am determined
 to be the catalyst for this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
.

“If you give a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 a fish, you feed him for a day. If you teach a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 to fish you feed him for a lifetime. ”Consider using an m-dash in dialogues and enumerations.—
-
 Chinese philosopher, Lao Possible spelling mistake found.TauBZUCZUTGUTTUTU
Tzu
. I ardently
 seek to feed generations of Nigerians to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for lifetimes far beyond mine– by giving those This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 them the key to unlocking their collective You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future-
 our collective You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectiveeventualsubsequentplannedimminentforthcoming
future
: You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
. 