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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discus both view? v.7

Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discus both view? v. 7
These days, modern people are keen to think that the design of the buildings and skyscrapers should be controlled by the authorities. However, others feel that the designers of the constructions should determinate the future style of the facilities, as they the art is independent, and the government control is unnecessary. On the one hand, it is true that cities and towns should be differentiated with each other. In this reason, many people are reckoned to think that the urban plan should be controlled by the authorities. Moreover, it is not reasonable to build the buildings which are similar to each other, and there should be a unique design of structures. For instance, there are should be a specific colour and height for the constructions such as apartment buildings and the places of worship. In addition, tourists are willing to visit the urban areas which are colourful and unique. On the other hand, it is clear that some people tend to think that the designers should create their artworks independently. In this regard, there are should not be any special agreement between the authorities and architects. Furthermore, some individuals are keen to think that the different style of the structures can attract the tourists. For example, the street art is attracting many travellers and visitors in Brazil. As a mater of fact, these art objects are not funded by the government budget. It is the compositions of poor people. In conclusion, although many people are willing to give a freedom for the architects, others feel that the urban design should be well-planned. In addition, many people are reckoned to think that if the authorities can regulate the urban plan, the cities and towns can attract more tourists.
These days, modern
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people
are keen to
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think
that the design of the buildings and skyscrapers should
be controlled
by the
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authorities
.
However
, others feel that the designers of the constructions should determinate the future style of the facilities, as they the art is independent, and the
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government
control is unnecessary.

On the one hand, it is true that cities and towns should
be differentiated
with each
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other
. In this reason,
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many
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people
are reckoned
to
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think
that the
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urban
plan should
be controlled
by the
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authorities
.
Moreover
, it is not reasonable to build the buildings which are similar to each
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other
, and there should be a unique design of structures.
For instance
, there are should be a specific
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colour
and height for the constructions such as apartment buildings and the places of worship.
In addition
, tourists are willing to visit the
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urban
areas which are
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colourful
and unique.

On the
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other
hand, it is
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clear
that
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some
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people
tend to
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think
that the designers should create their artworks
independently
. In this regard, there are should not be any special agreement between the
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authorities
and architects.
Furthermore
,
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some
individuals are keen to
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think
that the
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different
style of the structures can attract the tourists.
For example
, the street art is attracting
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many
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travellers
and visitors in Brazil. As a mater of fact, these art objects are not funded by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
budget. It is the compositions of poor
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people
.

In conclusion
, although
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many
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people
are willing to give
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a freedom
for the architects, others feel that the
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urban
design should be well-planned.
In addition
,
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many
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people
are reckoned
to
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think
that if the
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authorities
can regulate the
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urban
plan, the cities and towns can attract more tourists.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discus both view? v. 7

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4 paragraphs
287 words
8.5
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