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Some people feel that public money should not be spent on culture emanating such as museum theatre and art festival how important to think this thing a to society as a whole are there any area which are only important for the government to fall

Some people feel that public money should not be spent on culture emanating such as museum theatre and art festival how important to think this thing a to society as a whole are there any area which are only important for the government to fall ElLDD
Culture is an identity of our nation. All Nations have different solution. so, it is our responsibility to save and care of culture. Individuals deem that money ought not to be funded on culture facility like museum theatre and art festival. Some people think that there are numerous factor which have to improve their level and efficiency. Some platforms are mandatory to describe creativity and our nation
Culture is an identity of our nation. All Nations have
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different
solution.
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so
, it is our responsibility to save and care of culture. Individuals deem that money ought not to
be funded
on culture facility like museum
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theatre
and art festival.
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Some
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people
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think
that there are numerous
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factor
which
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have to
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improve
their level and efficiency.
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Some
platforms are mandatory to
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describe
creativity and our
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nation

IELTS essay Some people feel that public money should not be spent on culture emanating such as museum theatre and art festival how important to think this thing a to society as a whole are there any area which are only important for the government to fall

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  American English
1 paragraphs
66 words
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