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Nowadays, international companies and their products play a significant role almost a-cross the world among people. I strongly agree that these powerful companies are monopolized our lifestyle in various aspect such as favorites or education, so their impacts have to be reduced in our life. It is clear that the huge companies have dramatically become economic giants of the world. In fact, the dominant atmosphere in the society could be quickly managed by them. Moreover, they can persuade people to use their services or products through the advertising power while those goods are not the necessities of the society. For instance, consumption of soda and sugar products are widely rising all around the world. The regulatory organization in health are not able to prevent this trends, as well. Secondly, most local companies and small businesses are being ruined since they can not be present in the unfair competitive situation. Also, multinational companies are supported by the governments. That is why small businesses have just two options. Either work alone or become a subsidiary of the universal companies. In any case, they are the main losers in this unequal struggle. For example, several international companies are making special handicrafts of countries in large quantities by machines while it will destroy the art and handicraft of each area because they have to be made just by hand not machine. In conclusion, I strongly agree that the multinational companies are managing our life because of their financial purposes, and they use extensive advertising in this issue. I believe continuation of this way will ruin local businesses and handicrafts specially in developing countries.

Nowadays, international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 and their products play a significant role almost a-cross the world among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. I strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that these powerful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
are monopolized
 our lifestyle in various aspect such as favorites or education, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 their impacts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in our life.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 have dramatically
 become economic giants of the world. In fact, the dominant atmosphere in the society could be quickly
 managed by them. Moreover
, they can persuade This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 their services or products through the advertising power while those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
 are not the necessities of the society. For instance
, consumption of soda and sugar products are widely
 rising all around the world. The regulatory organization in health are not able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 this trends, as well
.

Secondly
, most local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 businesses are being ruined
 since they can not be present in the unfair competitive situation. Also
, multinational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
are supported
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
. That is
 why This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 businesses have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 two options. Either work alone or become a subsidiary of the universal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
. In any case, they are the main losers in this unequal struggle. For example
, several international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 are making special handicrafts of countries in large quantities by machines while it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
 the art and handicraft of each area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 by hand not machine.

In conclusion
, I strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that the multinational You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 are managing our life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their financial purposes, and they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 extensive advertising in this issue. I believe continuation of this way will ruin local businesses and handicrafts specially
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
. 