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Some people feel it is better to live in a city while others believe life is better in country side

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A section of society asserts that it is wonderful to spend life in a metropolis however another school of thought reckons living in rural area is superior. This essay intend to analyse both the ideologies in the subsequent paragraphs with my opinion. To commence with individuals prefer living in megalopolis as they have easy access to all the amenities such water, electricity, transportation, schools, hospitals and many more. Apart from these facilities, lifestyle of the people also gets upgraded and they enjoy a magnificent life. An article published in The Tribune reported that from the past few years tremendous amount of population has migrated from the villages to metropolitan either for studies, business or for job. Moreover present young generation now prefer to live in cosmopolitan as they are very much influenced and attracted by the limelight of metro life and as such are moving there to be part of it because they think that all there desires can be accomplished there. However few human beings like to pass their life in suburban areas. As per them they can spend quality time and life there, moreover there heath also improves due the fresh air, free from any type of pollution, in the countryside. The food is also free from any adulteration. Had we all been living in rural areas, our lives would have been marvellous, free from potentially fatal diseases. Moreover due to the mechanical lifestyle, stress, emotionless humans in the downtown many citizens undergo depression and mental disorders, so to overcome this monotonous, flawed and bland life urban people thinks it's worthwhile and exceptionally superb to be part of green belt where they can get a tranquil and pleasing environment. To conclude, although there are few challenges in living in the metro cities but it is altogether a beneficial Deal, as all the amenities are easily available and people like to enjoy the high standard of living. Hence a sagacious approach is advocated

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life
 in a metropolis however
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thought
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This essay intend
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analyse
 both the ideologies in the subsequent paragraphs with my opinion.

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living
 in megalopolis as they have easy access to all the amenities such water, electricity, transportation, schools, hospitals and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. Apart from these facilities, lifestyle of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
also
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gets
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upgraded and
 they enjoy a magnificent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. An article published in The Tribune reported that from the past few years tremendous amount of population has migrated from the villages to metropolitan either for studies, business or for job. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 present young generation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in cosmopolitan as they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much influenced and attracted by the limelight of metro You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 and as such are moving there to be part of it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that all there desires can be accomplished
 there.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 few human beings like to pass their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 in suburban areas. As per them they can spend quality time and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 there, moreover
 there heath also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorates
improves
 due the fresh air, free from any type of pollution, in the countryside. The food is also
 free from any adulteration. Had we all been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in rural areas, our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 would have been Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.marvelous
marvellous
, free from potentially
 fatal diseases.

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Moreover
 due to the mechanical lifestyle, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
, emotionless humans in the downtown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 citizens undergo depression and mental disorders, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 to overcome this monotonous, flawed and bland You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 urban This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.think
thinks
 it's worthwhile and exceptionally
 superb to be part of green belt where they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a tranquil and pleasing environment.

To conclude
, although there are few challenges in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 in the metro cities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is altogether a beneficial

Deal, as all the amenities are easily
 available and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 like to enjoy the high standard of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 a sagacious approach is Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphadvocated.advocated!advocated?advocated:advocated,advocated;
advocated