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Some people dream of reaching unlikely goals, while other people set more responsible goals which kind of person do you tend to be. Use examples to support your response.

Some people dream of reaching unlikely goals, while other people set more responsible goals which kind of person do you tend to be. Use examples to support your response. EdaAB
Every person has their personal goals. It is believed that some people dream of goals that seem impossible, while other people make responsible goals. I set almost impossible goals. This essay will elaborate on reasons to support both views. On one hand, some people set goals that seem impossible in order to change the pressure from their goals to motivation. the more people’s goals are hard to reach, the more pressure they have to carry. Since unlikely goals require a lot of effort and endeavor to succeed, people have to carry all of the pleasure and stress coming from their goals. Nonetheless, they do not think that pressure is their drawback, but they think it is the motivation that will push them to reach their goals. This means that people change the pleasure that is the negative sense to positive sense. On the other hand, some people make responsible goals to avoid disappointment. Since they do want to face failure goals in their life, they want to achieve their goals successfully. The more goals are hard to achieve, the less percentage of people reading their goals, while responsible goals are easy to achieve. This means that some people set likely goals instead of unlikely goals to guarantee themselves that they will achieve their goals. Therefore, they do not want to feel bad if their goals do not come true. In conclusion, there are different views and points of people setting their personal goals. The way people set their goals depends on what they want life to be. People who dream of unlikely goals want to change the pleasure from their goals to motivation that will push them to achieve the goals. However, some people set responsible goals to save themselves from disappointment because they do not want to face failure, or challenge themselves too much.
Every person has
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their
personal
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goals
. It
is believed
that
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some
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people
dream of
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goals
that seem impossible, while other
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people
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make
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responsible
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goals
. I set almost impossible
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goals
. This essay will elaborate on reasons to support both views.

On one hand,
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some
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people
set
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goals
that seem impossible in order to
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change
the pressure from their
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goals
to motivation.
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the
more
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people’s
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goals
are
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hard
to reach, the more pressure they
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have to
carry. Since unlikely
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goals
require
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a lot of
effort and endeavor to succeed,
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people
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have to
carry
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all of the
pleasure and
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stress
coming from their
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goals
. Nonetheless, they do not
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think
that pressure is their drawback,
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but
they
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think
it is the motivation that will push them to reach their
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goals
. This means that
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people
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change
the pleasure
that is
the
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negative
sense to
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positive
sense.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
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make
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responsible
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goals
to avoid disappointment. Since they do
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want
to face failure
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goals
in their life, they
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want
to
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achieve
their
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goals
successfully
. The more
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goals
are
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hard
to
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achieve
, the less percentage of
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people
reading their
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goals
, while
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responsible
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goals
are easy to
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achieve
. This means that
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some
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people
set likely
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goals
instead
of unlikely
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goals
to guarantee themselves that they will
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achieve
their
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goals
.
Therefore
, they do not
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want
to feel
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bad
if their
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goals
do not
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come
true.

In conclusion
, there are
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different
views and points of
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people
setting their personal
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goals
. The way
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people
set their
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goals
depends on what they
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want
life to be.
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People
who dream of unlikely
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goals
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want
to
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change
the pleasure from their
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goals
to motivation that will push them to
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achieve
the
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goals
.
However
,
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some
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people
set
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responsible
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goals
to save themselves from disappointment
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because
they do not
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want
to face failure, or challenge themselves too much.
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IELTS essay Some people dream of reaching unlikely goals, while other people set more responsible goals which kind of person do you tend to be. Use examples to support your response.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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