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Ways of encouraging youth to read book

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Nowadays, period is progressing day by day. Why do not youth read book in their leisure time? Do you try to learn something on internet? Firstly, we are living techniques century. Internet and social networks are most important our daily life. So many teenagers are keen on internet. They like playing computer games or others than reading book. Online games are interesting and captivating at present. Books seem boring for many youth. Secondly, it is worse position for future. If youth continue so that they will be unreasonable people. Parents must teach their weans. Youth should join in hard-faced tutors lessons. Parents motivate and promote us for reading book. Primarily, youth learn only gifts. Thereafter, they fond of books than other things. In addition to, teenagers should not use much sociel networks because it is harmful. In my view, parents do not punish us. I am a pupil so I know reading is helpful for me. I do not stop learning because life never stop teaching.
Nowadays, period is progressing day by day. Why do not
youth
read
book
in their leisure time? Do you try to learn something on internet?
Firstly
, we are living techniques century. Internet and social networks are most
important
our daily life.
So
many
teenagers
are keen on internet. They like playing computer games or others than reading
book
. Online games are interesting and captivating at present.
Books
seem boring for
many
youth
.
Secondly
, it is worse position for future. If
youth
continue
so
that they will be unreasonable
people
. Parents
must
teach their weans.
Youth
should
join
in
hard
-faced tutors lessons. Parents motivate and promote us for reading
book
.
Primarily
,
youth
learn
only
gifts. Thereafter, they fond of
books
than other things.
In addition
to,
teenagers
should not
use
much
sociel
networks
because
it is harmful. In my view, parents do not punish us. I am a pupil
so
I know reading is helpful for me. I do not
stop
learning
because
life never
stop
teaching.
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IELTS essay Ways of encouraging youth to read book

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
166 words
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