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Ways of encouraging youth to read book

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Nowadays, period is progressing day by day. Why do not youth read book in their leisure time? Do you try to learn something on internet? Firstly, we are living techniques century. Internet and social networks are most important our daily life. So many teenagers are keen on internet. They like playing computer games or others than reading book. Online games are interesting and captivating at present. Books seem boring for many youth. Secondly, it is worse position for future. If youth continue so that they will be unreasonable people. Parents must teach their weans. Youth should join in hard-faced tutors lessons. Parents motivate and promote us for reading book. Primarily, youth learn only gifts. Thereafter, they fond of books than other things. In addition to, teenagers should not use much sociel networks because it is harmful. In my view, parents do not punish us. I am a pupil so I know reading is helpful for me. I do not stop learning because life never stop teaching.
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read
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in their leisure time? Do you try to learn something on internet?
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important
our daily life.
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teenagers
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book
. Online games are interesting and captivating at present.
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Books
seem boring for
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youth
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youth
continue
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that they will be unreasonable
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. Parents
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must
teach their weans.
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should
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in
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hard
-faced tutors lessons. Parents motivate and promote us for reading
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book
.
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,
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youth
learn
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only
gifts. Thereafter, they fond of
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books
than other things.
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teenagers
should not
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it is harmful. In my view, parents do not punish us. I am a pupil
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so
I know reading is helpful for me. I do not
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learning
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IELTS essay Ways of encouraging youth to read book

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
166 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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