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Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. What is your opinion v.2

Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. What is your opinion v. 2
Telling the truth can sometimes be difficult. While most people prefer to free their minds by being certain in discussions while some other persons find it difficult to be accurate. This essay will discuss why I completely agree that it is preferable to factual when talking. Authenticity is a thing of integrity and should be taken seriously. There is a saying that certainly sets the mind and heart free. It can as well help free people that have been captured and needs truthfulness from a witness to set them free. There has been cases where an individual have been legit in words without thinking of the implications and people were instantly set free. Accuracy, not only set the speaker free, but also people around them. It could be sometimes difficult to be honest. There could be situations where lying than saying the real pays. Because, in most occasions, loyalty has led people to an early grave. There is a recent trending news of a woman that was convicted and jailed for about ten years and after several trials, she could not say the real because her life was at stake. In most cases, people tend to draw back from telling the truth because they are protecting a loved one. In conclusion, this essay discussed why it is good to be genuine will set the person and others around freely, it thus elaborated on the fact that honesty can sometimes be difficult because someone or something precious might suffer from that veracity. In my opinion, I completely believe that being precise can set everyone free.
Telling the truth can
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sometimes
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. While most
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people
prefer to
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free
their minds by being certain in discussions while
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some
other persons find it
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difficult
to be accurate. This essay will discuss why I completely
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agree
that it is preferable to factual when talking.

Authenticity is a thing of integrity and should
be taken
seriously
. There is a saying that
certainly
sets the mind and heart
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free
. It can
as well
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help
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free
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people
that have
been captured
and needs truthfulness from a witness to set them
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free
. There has been cases where an individual have been legit in words without thinking of the implications and
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people
were
instantly
set
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free
. Accuracy, not
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only
set the speaker
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free
,
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but
also
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people
around them.

It could be
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sometimes
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difficult
to be honest. There could be situations where lying than saying the real pays.
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Because
, in most occasions, loyalty has led
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people
to an early grave. There is a recent trending news of a woman that
was convicted
and jailed for about ten years and after several trials, she could not say the real
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
her life was at stake.
In most cases
,
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people
tend to draw back from telling the truth
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because
they are protecting a
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loved
one.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed why it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
to be genuine will set the person
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and others
around
freely
, it
thus
elaborated on the fact that honesty can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
difficult
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
someone or something precious might suffer from that veracity.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
my opinion, I completely believe that being precise can set everyone
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. What is your opinion v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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