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Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e. g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e. g. medical treatment). v. 1
What is the most important factor while buying a product or service? Some individuals think that price is the most important factor to consider when buying any goods or services. This essay disagrees with the argument, and will discuss why it is not so important and there are other factors like the budget and value for money the customer has in mind. Firstly, the purchasing decision depends on the capacity to purchase, which is the financial-budget of the person. If the price exceeds the budget of an individual, then it becomes difficult to execute any transaction. For example, an average middle class owns an android phone rather than an apple phone, as it is over his budget. Even if the quotation of the cellular device fell by 20%, it would not matter if it does not fit in the spending plan. Secondly, the item bought should be worth the money. If the perceived benefit of the services rendered by a medical practitioner is high, then the client is willing to pay any charges to avail those benefits. For instance, iPhone lovers are ready to pay any amount for the latest edition of the phone, as they think the quality is superior and it is worth every penny. The value created by a product is equally necessary to determine the worth. In conclusion, some people think that the consideration of a product or service is the single most important thing while deciding a good or service, but it is not. In my opinion, this essay disagrees with the statement and argues that estimated expenses and value for money are two main reasons to justify the price, and hence they play an important role during any purchase decision.
What is the most
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important
factor while buying a product or
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service
?
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Some
individuals
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think
that price is the most
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important
factor to consider when buying any
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goods
or
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services
. This essay disagrees with the argument, and will discuss why it is not
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so
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important
and there are other factors like the budget and value for money the customer has in mind.

Firstly
, the purchasing decision depends on the capacity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
, which is the financial-budget of the person. If the price exceeds the budget of an individual, then it becomes difficult to execute any transaction.
For example
, an average middle
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class
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owns
an android phone
rather
than an apple phone, as it is over his budget. Even if the quotation of the cellular device fell by 20%, it would not matter if it does not fit in the spending plan.

Secondly
, the item
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bought
should be worth the money. If the perceived benefit of the
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services
rendered by a medical practitioner is high, then the client is willing to pay any charges to avail those benefits.
For instance
, iPhone lovers are ready to pay any amount for the latest edition of the phone, as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
the quality is superior and it is worth every penny. The value created by a product is
equally
necessary to determine the worth.

In conclusion
,
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some
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people
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think
that the consideration of a product or
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service
is the single most
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important
thing while deciding a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
or
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service
,
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but
it is not. In my opinion, this essay disagrees with the statement and argues that estimated expenses and value for money are two main reasons to justify the price, and
hence
they play an
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important
role during any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
decision.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e. g. medical treatment). v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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