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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v.7

Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v. 7
Colours have a tremendous effect on the mood, as it stimulates the brain to behave in a certain manner. There are a numerous research papers confirming the results, hence it is important to lay emphasis on the hues and texture of the offices and public buildings. This argument is extremely true, and it increases individuals' productivity and well-being to a great extent. This essay will elaborate the importance of colour schemes in any establishment, private or public and its impact on the peoples' well-being and increased productivity. To begin with, colours play an important role in guiding the behaviour of the person, as it reacts with the subconscious mind and it sends some kind of subliminal message to the brain. For instance, shopping malls use the shade of purple, as it energises the salesmen and helps in working for longer hours without being fatigued. The productivity of the employees often increases when they are surrounded by blue colour. Psychologists have proven already that hues have an impact on our sensory organs and the mind reacts accordingly. Furthermore, many organizations have studied the impact of different colours on the human physique and help in improving the fitness-levels. The conscious mind sends the message to the body and all the hormones are activated. For example, often pink, green and blue colours are associated with good health and it is suggested that, in hospitals and clinics a combination of these shades should be used to make the patients feel calm and recuperate from their illness. Thus, creating an atmosphere of joy, happiness and positive vibes, many illnesses can be cured. In conclusion, I pen down, saying that hues have a significant role to play in affecting the environment around the people and control their behaviour. In my opinion, a thoughtful approach should be used while creating the ambience of an office or a hospital, as it has a tremendous effect on the output and the fitness of a person.
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Colours
have a tremendous effect on the mood, as it stimulates the brain to behave in a certain manner. There are a numerous research papers confirming the results,
hence
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to lay emphasis on the hues and texture of the offices and public buildings. This argument is
extremely
true, and it increases individuals' productivity and well-being to a great extent. This essay will elaborate the importance of
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
schemes in any establishment, private or public and its impact on the peoples' well-being and increased productivity.

To
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begin
with,
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colours
play an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in guiding the
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behaviour
of the person, as it reacts with the subconscious mind and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sends
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some
kind of subliminal message to the brain.
For instance
, shopping malls
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use
the shade of purple, as it
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energises
the salesmen and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in working for longer hours without
being fatigued
. The productivity of the employees
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often
increases when they
are surrounded
by blue
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colour
. Psychologists have proven already that hues have an impact on our sensory organs and the mind reacts
accordingly
.

Furthermore
,
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many
organizations have studied the impact of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
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colours
on the human physique and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in improving the fitness-levels. The conscious mind
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sends
the message to the body and all the hormones
are activated
.
For example
,
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often
pink, green and blue
Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.
colours
are associated
with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health and it
is suggested
that, in hospitals and clinics a combination of these shades should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the patients feel calm and recuperate from their illness.
Thus
, creating an atmosphere of joy, happiness and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
vibes,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
illnesses can
be cured
.

In conclusion
, I pen down, saying that hues have a significant role to play in affecting the environment around the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and control their
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.
behaviour
. In my opinion, a thoughtful approach should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
while creating the ambience of an office or a hospital, as it has a tremendous effect on the output and the fitness of a person.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work? v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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