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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. 3y7l
Someone has rightly said that – ―The car has become an article of dress without which we feel uncertain, unclad, and incomplete‖. In my opinion, the advantages of the car outstrip its disadvantages. There are many advantages of car. The most important advantage is that it has given people freedom of movement. The ease of transportation which a car brings is more than any other form of transportation. For instance, you can go from destination to destination and no time is wasted waiting for the bus or train. Therefore, time and distance are not a barrier any more. What is more, families can go out together. This becomes especially helpful when there are elderly or the disabled and sick members in the family. Furthermore, the automobile industry provides jobs to millions of workers. Filling stations, restaurants, and other businesses that serve automobile travelers are of major importance to a country‘s economy. In addition, many developing nations have begun making automobiles to boost their economy. That is why India has promoted many automobile manufacturing industries such as Tata and Mahindra. On the other hand the disadvantages of the car cannot be overlooked. The increase in pollution, traffic jams and accidents are the natural sequelae to the burgeoning population of cars. Moreover, our overdependence on cars can lead to decrease in practices such as walking and cycling and this has led to a number of diseases such as obesity. On balance, the advantages to people‘s lives and the economic impact created by the car definitely outweigh the disadvantages. However, we must know when and how-much to use the car so that we can minimize the demerits to some extent.
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―The
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car
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which
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incomplete‖
. In my opinion, the
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advantages
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of


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the
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car
outstrip its disadvantages.

There are
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many
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advantages
of
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. The most
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important
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advantage
is that it
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has


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given
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people
freedom of movement. The
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ease
of transportation which a
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brings
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is


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more
than any other form of transportation.
For instance
, you can go
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from


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destination
to destination and no time
is wasted
waiting for the bus or train.

Therefore
, time and distance are not a barrier
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any more
.
What is more
, families
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can


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go
out together. This becomes
especially
helpful when there are elderly or
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the


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disabled
and sick members in the family.

Furthermore
, the
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automobile
industry provides jobs to millions of workers. Filling

stations, restaurants, and other businesses that serve
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automobile
travelers are of

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major
importance to a country‘s economy.
In addition
,
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many
developing nations
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have


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begun
making
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automobiles
to boost their economy.
That is
why India has
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promoted


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many
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automobile
manufacturing industries such as Tata and Mahindra.

On the other hand
the disadvantages of the
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car
cannot
be overlooked
. The
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increase


in pollution, traffic jams and accidents are the natural
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sequelae
to the burgeoning

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population
of
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cars
.
Moreover
, our
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overdependence
on
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cars
can lead to decrease in

practices such as walking and cycling and this has led to a number of diseases such

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as
obesity.

On balance, the
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advantages
to
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people
‘s
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lives
and the economic impact created by

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the
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car
definitely outweigh the disadvantages.
However
, we
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must
know when and

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how-much
to
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use
the
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car
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so
that we can minimize the demerits to
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some
extent.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages.

Essay
  American English
23 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
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