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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples

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It is very important that some people should have there own ideas as it is vital for there development in there future life so for this reason it is my concern to write this essay so that it can be used to help those who are in need of help I can share a number of ideas which can be used by them to improve there current life as well as there future life so initially I will like to discuss some of my problems that I face back in my life when I was a teenager. Well I must say I was not good in my studies even not in any activity.

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ideas
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ideas
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improve
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current
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life
as well
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life
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 of my problems that I face back in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 when I was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
. Well I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
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 say I was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 in my studies even not in any activity. 