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Some people claim that owning a car brings a lot of problems. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

Some people claim that owning a car brings a lot of problems. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car. PRmYj
In general, private transport like a car is considered more convenient than public transport. It is not true if some people say that. Owning a car can be more beneficial. If there is an urgent matter that needs to be solved immediately, instead of having to wait for public transport, personal vehicles will save more time. It makes people feel comfortable, with hot weather you just need to turn on the air conditioner in the car and enjoy it, you can also turn on the radio or play favorite music without worrying about disturbing people around. The chances of getting infected are lower. When in a car alone or with family, do not come into contact with many people, the chance of contracting diseases will be less likely. So if you are a person who is prone to diseases or afraid of being infected, it is better to have private transport instead of using public transit. Besides, having a car also has a few problems. In terms of price, it is very expensive to be able to buy a car. It also causes heavy air pollution, because when there are too many vehicles on a road, the smoke will pollute the air and it is the main cause of traffic jams in the country. It will have to pay the cost of vehicle maintenance and extras other fees. Owning a car will bring a lot of benefits and also a few small disadvantages. Please consider choosing a means of transport that can make you feel as comfortable and convenient as possible.
In general
, private
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transport
like a
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car
is considered
more convenient than public
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transport
. It is not true if
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some
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people
say that.

Owning a
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car
can be more beneficial. If there is an urgent matter that needs to
be solved
immediately,
instead
of having to wait for public
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transport
, personal vehicles will save more time. It
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makes
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people
feel comfortable, with hot weather you
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just
need to turn on the air conditioner in the
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car
and enjoy it, you can
also
turn on the radio or play favorite music without worrying about disturbing
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people
around. The chances of getting infected are lower. When in a
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car
alone or with family, do not
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come
into contact with
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many
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people
, the chance of contracting diseases will be less likely.
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So
if you are a person who is prone to diseases or afraid of
being infected
, it is better to have private
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
instead
of using public transit.
Besides
, having a
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car
also
has a few problems. In terms of price, it is
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very
expensive to be able to
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buy
a
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car
. It
also
causes heavy air pollution,
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because
when there are too
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many
vehicles on a road, the smoke will pollute the air and it is the main cause of traffic jams in the country. It will
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have to
pay the cost of vehicle maintenance and extras other fees.

Owning a
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car
will bring
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a lot of
benefits and
also
a few
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small
disadvantages.
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Please
consider choosing a means of
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transport
that can
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make
you feel as comfortable and convenient as possible.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that owning a car brings a lot of problems. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
261 words
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