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pros and cons of salvage logging

pros and cons of salvage logging 73dBA
Given the information in the text, there is a method named salvage logging which is used to removing dead trees in a forest fire and has many economical and environmental advantages. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all. First of all, the reading claims that when salvage logging method is applied as removing the dead trees, the area was as a fire zone can achieve its power to reproduce new trees as soon as possible. In the other hand the place will be free for implanting new trees there. In contrast, the professor underlines the fact that removing dead trees causes infertility of the soil. Actually, the dead tree is the same as nutrient material for the soil which help to grow remained trees more. Moreover, the author argues that by removing trees with this method, it is possible to destroy the harmful insect nuts. Conversely, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that, by removing the dead trees as harmful insect, in real habitant of other animal species like birds and unharmful insects will be damaged too. Finally, the reading passage asserts that using the method has economic benefit as applying the dead trees in industrial wood company and creating lots of job opportunities of native people. In contrast, the lecturer birngs up the idea that removing dead tree from fire zone needs other expensive equipment like a Helicopter. as a result it can not be feasible economically and dose not help to the local people.
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the information in the text, there is a
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method
named salvage logging which is
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used
to
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removing
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dead
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trees
in a forest fire and has
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many
economical and environmental advantages.
However
, the lecturer finds all the
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ideas
dubious and presents
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some
evidence to refute them all.

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First of all
, the reading claims that when salvage logging
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method
is applied
as
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removing
the
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dead
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trees
, the area was as a fire zone can achieve its power to reproduce new
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trees
as
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soon
as possible. In the other hand the place will be free for implanting new
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trees
there.
In contrast
, the professor underlines the fact that
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removing
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dead
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trees
causes infertility of the soil. Actually, the
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dead
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tree
is the same as nutrient material for the soil which
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help
to grow remained
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trees
more.

Moreover
, the author argues that by
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removing
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trees
with this
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method
, it is possible to
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destroy
the harmful insect nuts.
Conversely
, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that, by
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removing
the
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dead
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trees
as harmful insect, in real habitant of other animal species like birds and unharmful insects will
be damaged
too.

Finally
, the reading passage asserts that using the
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method
has economic benefit as applying the
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dead
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trees
in industrial wood
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company
and creating lots of job opportunities of native
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people
.
In contrast
, the lecturer
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birngs
up the
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idea
that
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removing
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dead
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tree
from fire zone needs other expensive equipment like a Helicopter.
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as
a result it can not be feasible
economically
and dose not
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help
to the local
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people
.
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IELTS essay pros and cons of salvage logging

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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