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some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled they say that the only way to increase recycling is making it a legal requirement to what extent do you agree

some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled they say that the only way to increase recycling is making it a legal requirement to what extent do you agree Mw8Pp
Recycling effectively has been a topic of debate for many decades. Many believe that most domestic waste ends up accumulating in the environment affecting biodiversity. It is suggested that in order to overcome this problem, authorities should set up laws against it; however, making it a legal requirement alone will not solve this issue environmental awareness should be raised among individuals. Those who claim legal policies will solve these problems believe that, if policymakers make it a legal requirement to recycle household waste, people will follow it more vigorously as they do not want to face distasteful consequences. Additionally, if people get penalized for their careless actions of not ensuring that their waste is recycled they will become more cautious and think twice before throwing their waste anywhere. For instance, Saudi Arabia has successfully achieved the goal of recycling all the domestic waste generated by making strict rules for waste management. However, these policies do not provide long-term solutions because after a certain point people will stop following these rules because of their negligence and will simply accept all the consequences, as there have been many instances in the past where this kind of schemes has failed completely after a while of their implementation. For example, India's policy of banning plastic was a complete failure after 5 weeks of implementation Also, this making everyone follow these laws can be practically not possible because there is a huge population, so it will be difficult for concerned policymakers to ensure everyone is following them, saying that, I believe people should realize the effect of not recycling on the environment by organizing campaigns by government and encouraging everyone to follow a sustainable lifestyle which will also help to improve biodiversity. To conclude, Legal actions is not the solution for proper management of the waste produced in homes because it is not possible to implement it effectively, instead of this making people realize the outcomes of not recycling their waste in nature will be a long term so
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effectively
has been a topic of debate for
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many
decades.
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Many
believe that most domestic
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waste
ends up accumulating in the environment affecting biodiversity. It
is suggested
that in order to overcome this problem, authorities should set up laws against it;
however
, making it a
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legal
requirement alone will not solve this issue environmental awareness should
be raised
among individuals.

Those who claim
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legal
policies will solve these problems believe that, if policymakers
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make
it a
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legal
requirement to recycle household
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waste
,
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people
will follow it more
vigorously
as they do not want to face distasteful consequences.
Additionally
, if
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people
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get
penalized for their careless actions of not ensuring that their
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waste
is recycled
they will become more cautious and
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think
twice
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before
throwing their
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waste
anywhere.
For instance
, Saudi Arabia has
successfully
achieved the goal of
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recycling
all the domestic
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waste
generated by making strict
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rules
for
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waste
management.

However
, these policies do not provide long-term solutions
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because
after a certain point
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people
will
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stop
following these
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rules
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because
of their negligence and will
simply
accept all the consequences, as there have been
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many
instances in the past where this kind of schemes has failed completely after a while of their implementation.
For example
, India's policy of banning plastic was a complete failure after 5 weeks of implementation
Also
, this making everyone
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follow
these laws can be
practically
not possible
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because
there is a huge population,
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so
it will be difficult for concerned policymakers to ensure everyone is following them, saying that, I believe
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people
should realize the effect of not
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recycling
on the environment by organizing campaigns by
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government
and encouraging everyone to follow a sustainable lifestyle which will
also
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help
to
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improve
biodiversity.

To conclude
,
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Legal
actions is not the solution for proper management of the
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waste
produced in homes
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because
it is not possible to implement it
effectively
,
instead
of this making
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people
realize the outcomes of not
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recycling
their
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waste
in nature will be a long term
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so

IELTS essay some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled they say that the only way to increase recycling is making it a legal requirement to what extent do you agree

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333 words
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