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Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste v.2

Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement 2
Most people are aware that recycling is the best way to preserve our environment, however very few people exert the effort to do so. The pertinent question is what can make people to recycle their wastes appropriately? I completely agree that forming strict rules and regulations pertaining to waste management can result into efficient recycling and preserve our natural habitats. Firstly, most people have ignored the damage that has already happened to our environment due to illegal dumping, burning of wastes and too much use of plastic. At the same time, we continue to mass produce plastic which does not decompose quickly. Due to lack of recycling, a lot of plastic is ending up in landfills which need to be stopped. A strict law can change the public attitude of irresponsible dumping and encourage reuse of such non bio-degradable substances. Secondly, rules imposing monetary fines have been proven to be successful for keeping cities clean. For instance, the city-state of Singapore has imposed fines on spitting, illegal dumping and even eating chewing gums. The result speaks for itself; putting Singapore as one of the cleanest cities on earth. This illustrates the role of law and monetary fines in inculcating public discipline; which is required to deal with the problem of global warming and protecting our environment. Lastly, all other measures like campaigns and awareness programs have failed to show the improvements. Despite of government’s campaigns, celebrity shows and messages on social media conveying the importance of recycling; there are many who still do not segregate wastes into degradable and non-degradable bins. When nothing else seems to work to encourage recycling, stricter rules & regulations can be imposed as a last resort to mandate recycling. Although, such laws could be challenging to implement initially, the ultimate goal of such protection is to safe guard the health of future generations. In conclusion, it has been high time for us to react together as a society, as inappropriate dumping has caused enough damage to our land and the oceans. It is imperative, that governments consider stringent measures and introduce laws to protect the environment.
Most
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people
are aware that
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recycling
is the best way to preserve our environment,
however
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very
few
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people
exert the effort to do
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so
. The pertinent question is what can
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make
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people
to recycle their
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wastes
appropriately
? I completely
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agree
that forming strict
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rules
and regulations pertaining to
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waste
management can result into efficient
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recycling
and preserve our natural habitats.

Firstly
, most
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people
have
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ignored
the damage that has already happened to our environment due to illegal
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dumping
, burning of
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wastes
and too much
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use
of plastic. At the same time, we continue to mass produce plastic which does not decompose
quickly
. Due to lack of
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recycling
,
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a lot of
plastic is ending up in landfills which need to be
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stopped
. A strict
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law
can
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change
the public attitude of irresponsible
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dumping
and encourage reuse of such non bio-degradable substances.

Secondly
,
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rules
imposing monetary fines have
been proven
to be successful for keeping cities clean.
For instance
, the city-state of Singapore has imposed fines on spitting, illegal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dumping
and even eating chewing gums. The result speaks for itself; putting Singapore as one of the cleanest cities on earth. This illustrates the role of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
and monetary fines in inculcating public discipline; which
is required
to deal with the problem of global warming and protecting our environment.

Lastly
, all other measures like campaigns and awareness programs have failed to
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show
the improvements.
Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
Despite of
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government
’s campaigns, celebrity
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shows
and messages on social media conveying the importance of
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recycling
; there are
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many
who
still
do not segregate
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wastes
into degradable and non-degradable bins. When nothing else seems to work to encourage
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recycling
, stricter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
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&amp
; regulations can
be imposed
as a last resort to mandate
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recycling
. Although, such
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laws
could be challenging
Did you mean "implementing"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to implement
initially
, the ultimate goal of such protection is to safe guard the health of future generations.

In conclusion
, it has been high time for us to react together as a society, as inappropriate
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dumping
has caused
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
damage to our land and the oceans. It is imperative, that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
consider stringent measures and introduce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
to protect the environment.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
351 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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