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Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.1

Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 1
Due to the ever-increasing population, most of the states have faced in trash disposal and recycling problems. personally, I advocate the opinion that in order to moderate the waste problem and increase the recycling issue, the government should legislate law in which citizens and industries manage their waste to recycle these. The main reason why a legal requirement about recycling is considered a positive development is that it makes to abide by the companies and citizens a determined rule. Take a company as an example, Since the packing of products plays a pivotal role in increasing the waste not only by the company but also by consumers, it is a considerably rich perspective to force the firm used the recyclable and degradable raw materials in which would be eliminated the problems of non-degradable plastics that would remain intact for millennia. The law would be kept health our environment and as a whole our planet, the Earth. This is also a considerable case that governments legislate to limit the energy use for industries and firms be forced to recycle their waste to the energy generation. These are a couple of ways in which display the positive trends of legislation in recycling waste. Another rational justification about needed law for recycling is that governments should legislate some laws to contract with recycling firms for industries and hold indirect supervision on their performance via related councils. The benefit accruing of contracting with relevant companies is mutual for the government and the industries. Not only do industries manage their waste, which is a perennial problem, to generate energy or raw materials but also leads to the development of the recycling industry in the nations and makes it a lot of job opportunities for youth. That is why legislation about recycling positively taken as a whole. To sum up, considering the point discussed above, the most reasonable conclusion to be drawn is that basic measures for recycling issue have to be held by governments throughout the legislation and these laws are necessary for continuing survival of nature. This is mainly because there would be serious repercussions involved and government laws like this can easily prohibit to take their toll on nature as well as the vulnerable ecosystem.
Due to the ever-increasing population, most of the states have faced in trash disposal and
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recycling
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problems
.
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personally
, I advocate the opinion that in order to moderate the
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waste
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problem
and increase the
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recycling
issue, the
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government
should legislate
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law
in which citizens and
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industries
manage their
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waste
to recycle these.

The main reason why a legal requirement about
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recycling
is considered
a
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positive
development is that it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
to abide by the
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companies
and citizens a determined
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rule
. Take a
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company
as an example, Since the packing of products plays a pivotal role in increasing the
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waste
not
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only
by the
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company
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but
also
by consumers, it is a
considerably
rich perspective to force the firm
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used
the recyclable and degradable raw materials in which would
be eliminated
the
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problems
of non-degradable plastics that would remain intact for millennia. The
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law
would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
health our environment and as a whole our planet, the Earth. This is
also
a considerable case that
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governments
legislate to limit the energy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for
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industries
and firms
be forced
to recycle their
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waste
to the energy generation. These are a couple of ways in which display the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
trends of legislation in
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recycling
waste.

Another rational justification about needed
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law
for
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recycling
is that
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governments
should legislate
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some
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laws
to contract with
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recycling
firms for
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industries
and hold indirect supervision on their performance via related councils. The benefit accruing of contracting with relevant
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companies
is mutual for the
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government
and the
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industries
. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
do
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industries
manage their
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waste
, which is a perennial
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problem
, to generate energy or raw materials
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
leads to the development of the
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recycling
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industry
in the nations and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
job opportunities for youth.
That is
why legislation about
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recycling
positively
taken as a whole.

To sum up, considering the point discussed above, the most reasonable conclusion to
be drawn
is that basic measures for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
issue
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be held
by
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governments
throughout the legislation and these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
are necessary for continuing survival of nature. This is
mainly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there would be serious repercussions involved and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
like this can
easily
prohibit to take their toll on nature
as well
as the vulnerable ecosystem.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
372 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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