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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Nowadays, countries are advocating citizens to protect environment in a number of aspects. For example, governments encourage individuals recycling. However, some individuals make a statement that few waste recycled from homes. They reckon that the only approach to rise recycling is to suggest governments to reinforce residences from law. I strongly disagree with this point of view also in this essay I will explain why with some examples. No one can deny that the aim of the process is to protect surroundings through the recycling. Yet, countries have no rights to force individuals to increase recycling also it will result in a number of disadvantages. To start with, this may cause the chaos to the society by individuals who may paradise on the street to argue that the phenomenon of recycling is unnecessary to arise in wealthy families also they concern about the sanitation with recycling. For example, plastic bags find difficult to disinfect by using second times and therefore individuals will get illness. Thus, individuals will less use any wastes for recycling. Consequently, laws may not force citizens recycling due to the fact that it will trigger the controversy also it will cause illness to the people without completely clean up. However, governments go through the law to supervise people protecting environment by recycling which brings a variety of benefits to the society. It will decrease a large numbers of containers in the street by people littered. Therefore, ecological system will be improved in a large extent. What I mean is that governments make a legal requirement for regulating recycling and thus citizens can not leave containers as waste. Consequently, less of wastes will exist. In conclusion, although put recycling into the law will decrease waste and improve ecosystem, I personally believe that government can not force people recycling due to the fact that it will cause dispute in confusion also recycling is not completely secure for individuals.
Nowadays, countries are advocating citizens to protect environment in a number of aspects.
For example
,
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governments
encourage
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individuals
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
However
,
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some
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individuals
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make
a statement that few
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waste
recycled from homes. They reckon that the
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only
approach to rise
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recycling
is to suggest
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governments
to reinforce residences from
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law
. I
strongly
disagree with this point of view
also
in this essay I will
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explain
why with
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some
examples.

No one can deny that the aim of the process is to protect surroundings through the
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recycling
.
Yet
, countries have no rights to force
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individuals
to increase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
also
it will result in a number of disadvantages. To
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start
with, this may cause the chaos to the society by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
who may paradise on the street to argue that the phenomenon of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
is unnecessary to arise in wealthy families
also
they concern about the sanitation with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
For example
, plastic bags find difficult to disinfect by using second times and
therefore
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individuals
will
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get
illness.
Thus
,
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individuals
will less
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use
any
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wastes
for
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recycling
.
Consequently
,
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laws
may not force citizens
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
due to the fact that it will trigger the controversy
also
it will cause illness to the
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people
without completely clean up.

However
,
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governments
go through the
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law
to supervise
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
protecting environment by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
which brings a variety of benefits to the society. It will decrease a large
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numbers
of containers in the street by
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people
littered.
Therefore
, ecological system will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
in a large extent. What I mean is that
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governments
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a legal requirement for regulating
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recycling
and
thus
citizens can not
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leave
containers as
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waste
.
Consequently
, less of
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wastes
will exist.

In conclusion
, although put
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recycling
into the
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law
will decrease
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waste
and
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improve
ecosystem, I
personally
believe that
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government
can not force
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people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
due to the fact that it will cause dispute in confusion
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
is not completely secure for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individuals
.

IELTS essay some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
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