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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. GgeQ
All around the world, people are producing more and more waste because of increasing standards of living. This is a potential environmental catastrophe, but it can be mitigated by a number of steps, including recycling. In some countries, governments have made recycling a legal requirement, and I wholeheartedly endorse this position. While it is important that a government gives its citizens freedom, it is clear that people are simply not taking responsibility for their actions in regards waste. Efforts to gently encourage people to recycle have failed for various reasons. There are numerous incentives that can be put in place, but these don’t guarantee people’s co-operation and can be costly for governments. However, a stiff punishment acts as a suitable deterrent and will see many people, who otherwise would ignore incentives and suggestions, fall in line with the government’s position. Furthermore, the importance of our earth’s future is simply too great to be placed in the hands of average people. The common citizen has too many worries in their daily life, and cannot reasonably be expected to willingly devote their time and energy to recycling. Although it may seem harsh to make it a legal requirement, this ensures everyone’s future. In the end, it is preferable for a few people to be punished than for everyone to suffer the disasters associated with environmental degradation. In conclusion, I believe that it is justifiable for governments to implement laws mandating recycling by all citizens, even though on the surface it may appear like a draconic measure.
All around the world,
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people
are producing more and more waste
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because
of increasing standards of living. This is a potential environmental catastrophe,
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but
it can
be mitigated
by a number of steps, including
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recycling
. In
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some
countries,
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governments
have made
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recycling
a legal requirement, and I
wholeheartedly
endorse this position.

While it is
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important
that a
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government
gives its citizens freedom, it is
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clear
that
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people
are
simply
not taking responsibility for their actions in regards waste. Efforts to
gently
encourage
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people
to recycle have failed for various reasons. There are numerous incentives that can
be put
in place,
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but
these don’t guarantee
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people’s
co-operation and can be costly for
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governments
.
However
, a stiff punishment acts as a suitable deterrent and will
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see
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many
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people
, who
otherwise
would
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ignore
incentives and suggestions, fall in line with the
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government’s
position.

Furthermore
, the importance of our earth’s future is
simply
too great to
be placed
in the hands of average
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people
. The common citizen has too
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many
worries in their daily life, and cannot
reasonably
be
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expected
to
willingly
devote their time and energy to
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recycling
. Although it may seem harsh to
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make
it a legal requirement, this ensures everyone’s future. In the
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end
, it is preferable for a few
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people
to
be punished
than for everyone to suffer the disasters associated with environmental degradation.

In conclusion
, I believe that it is justifiable for
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governments
to implement laws mandating
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recycling
by all citizens,
even though
on the surface it may appear like a
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draconic
measure.
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IELTS essay some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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