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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. JNjw
“Waste recycling” is the management of waste or used substances to make them reusable. It is also one of the most widely discussed environmental issues as it is a convenient process for the environment. It is done to lessen the consumption of fresh raw materials and emission of greenhouse gases. It mitigates pollutions too. Thus, waste recycling deals significantly with the environment to maintain its freshness and greenery. Many people want to take actions against the waste problem, but they find themselves alone which insists them to step back. They want the government to make it a legal requirement. However, lots of laws are already imposed by the government. But, the main reason for such needs are the people who ignore this global issue and do not participate in recycling efforts. If only the waste sprinkler himself/herself carries the responsibility to maintain garbage, then recycling procedure will be easy. Many opines that people want to implement under obligations from the concern of punishment and fine to avoid spreading waste and taking keen interest to recycle it. And it is a fact that the number of participants increasing dramatically. Everyone knows that power plays a significant role in the implementation of any strategy. The primary and highlighted example of this policy is the advanced and severe countries. The government has strict rules there, so citizens also do not dare to smear their household waste here and there. They use not only dustbins but also sort out with their waste themselves by reusing and recycling it with simple, homely tricks. They use different bags for the right collection of garbage. This trend makes the work much easy for management. Additionally, it shows that efficient recycling only possible by the involvement of citizens. In conclusion, many people know the consequences of environmental harassment, so they work to save the environment. Rule and regulations are more than enough by this time. Now, the only thing that government has to do is to punish offenders effectively. It will insist those people who are not still taking part in it. They will follow positive deeds and avoid contrary practices to maintain peaceful surroundings.
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“Waste
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is the management of
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waste
or
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used
substances to
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make
them reusable. It is
also
one of the most
widely
discussed environmental issues as it is a convenient process for the environment. It
is done
to lessen the consumption of fresh raw materials and emission of greenhouse gases.
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It
mitigates pollutions too.
Thus
,
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waste
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recycling
deals
significantly
with the environment to maintain its freshness and greenery.

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Many
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people
want to take actions against the
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waste
problem,
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but
they find themselves alone which insists them to step back. They want the
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government
to
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make
it a legal requirement.
However
, lots of laws are already imposed by the
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government
.
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But
, the main reason for such needs are the
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people
who
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ignore
this global issue and do not participate in
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recycling
efforts. If
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only
the
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waste
sprinkler himself/herself carries the responsibility to maintain garbage, then
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recycling
procedure will be easy.
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Many
opines that
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people
want to implement under obligations from the concern of punishment and fine to avoid spreading
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waste
and taking keen interest to recycle it. And it is a fact that the number of participants increasing
dramatically
.

Everyone knows that power plays a significant role in the implementation of any strategy. The primary and highlighted example of this policy is the advanced and severe countries. The
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government
has strict
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
there,
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so
citizens
also
do not dare to smear their household
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waste
here and there. They
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use
not
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only
dustbins
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but
also
sort out with their
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waste
themselves by reusing and
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recycling
it with simple, homely tricks. They
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
bags for the right collection of garbage. This trend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the work much easy for management.
Additionally
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that efficient
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recycling
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only
possible by the involvement of citizens.

In conclusion
,
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many
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people
know the consequences of environmental harassment,
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so
they work to save the environment.
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Rule
and regulations are more than
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enough
by this time.
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Now
, the
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only
thing that
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government
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has to
do is to punish offenders
effectively
. It will insist those
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people
who are not
still
taking part in it. They will follow
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positive
deeds and avoid contrary practices to maintain peaceful surroundings.
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IELTS essay some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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