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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are containing to rise at an alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are containing to rise at an alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions. VROD
In 21st century the people are facing the hazard of rising sea levels, this directly effects on the rise of global temperatures. Firstly this essay will discuss the critical problems that we humans are likely to face in the near future and in the latter half will discuss expose feasible solutions. On one hand, climate change is the primary problem for the escalation of the sea levels which leads to floods. As a result, the glaciers are melting and the water is combined into the sea. The people living near the coastal areas act as the victims of the disasters. For instance, the dangerous attack that took place in Himachal Pradesh in 2021 that wiped near 180 people who are working for hydro electric power project. Only 2 dead bodies were able to recover. Thus, climate variations will proportionally effect the mankind. On other hand, the quick fix for this difficulty is protecting natural resources by afforestation. However, pollution should also be confined to protect the environment. Constructing dams, rivers are used to store water and helps to divert the water during tsunamis. In case of emergency gates of the reservoirs are opened to control the flow of water. For instance, the Chief Minister of Telangana started a initiative program know as “harithaharam” for planting trees and “kaleshwaram “ project was built to conserve the water. In summary, preservative measures should be considered to cope up with the upcoming dangers. Therefore, the sea levels will rise eventually which effects the global warming. To eradicate threats planting trees and imposing new techniques to preserve water would control the temperatures.
In 21st century the
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people
are facing the hazard of rising
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sea
levels, this
directly
effects on the rise of global temperatures.
Firstly
this essay will discuss the critical problems that we humans are likely to face in the near future and in the latter half will discuss expose feasible solutions.

On one hand, climate
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change
is the primary problem for the escalation of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sea
levels which leads to floods.
As a result
, the glaciers are melting and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is combined
into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sea
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
living near the coastal areas act as the victims of the disasters.
For instance
, the
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dangerous
attack that took place in Himachal Pradesh in 2021 that wiped near 180
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people
who are working for
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hydro electric
power project.
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Only
2 dead bodies were able to recover.
Thus
, climate variations will
proportionally
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effect
the mankind.

On other hand, the quick
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fix
for this difficulty is protecting natural resources by afforestation.
However
, pollution should
also
be confined
to protect the environment. Constructing dams, rivers are
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used
to store
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water
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to divert the
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water
during tsunamis. In case of emergency gates of the reservoirs
are opened
to control the flow of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
.
For instance
, the Chief Minister of Telangana
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started
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a
initiative program know as “
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harithaharam
” for planting trees and “
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kaleshwaram
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“
project
was built
to conserve the
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water
. In summary, preservative measures should
be considered
to cope up with the upcoming
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dangers
.

Therefore
, the
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sea
levels will rise
eventually
which effects the global warming. To eradicate threats planting trees and imposing new techniques to preserve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
would control the temperatures.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are containing to rise at an alarming rate. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
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