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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste Drm6
Nowadays, waste generated from homes have a high amount than before due to more population that lived inside the house. Household's waste had a variety of wastes to be categorized such as food waste from food consuming, household appliances such as toilet paper or plastic bags from shopping, even dangerous waste such as smartphone's battery or charger. As I have seen by today, most of the people already have more than average knowledge of wastes could be recycle. However, despite the public campaign of recycling is advertised throughout Thailand which is the place I currently lived in, the elders still did not give full attention to the pollution that they created as it should be. As of my observation, if the law is constructed and set it to be on a huge amount of fine to the individual that did not obey or act against it, the people will be much more afraid and respect the regulations more. Since as the stereotypes of Thai citizen I had experienced, they will be afraid to lose high amount of money as per one time they been caught, so they will be afraid to lose high amount of money as per one time they been caught, so they wil try to not do anything that is misconduct or will get them into trouble for misbehaving. In conclusion, I am strongly agree on increase the strength of the law to be powerful for the fine in order to encourage the society to be cleaner and reduce the pollution for the better and brighter future of new hope generation.
Nowadays,
waste
generated from homes have a high
amount
than
before
due to more population that
lived
inside the
house
. Household's
waste
had a variety of
wastes
to
be categorized
such as food
waste
from food consuming, household appliances such as toilet paper or plastic bags from shopping, even
dangerous
waste
such as smartphone's battery or charger.

As I have
seen
by
today
, most of the
people
already have more than average knowledge of
wastes
could be
recycle
.
However
, despite the public campaign of recycling
is advertised
throughout Thailand which is the place I
currently
lived
in, the elders
still
did not give full attention to the pollution that they created as it should be.

As of my observation, if the law
is constructed
and set it to be on a huge
amount
of fine to the individual that did not obey or act against it, the
people
will be much more afraid and respect the regulations more. Since as the stereotypes of Thai citizen I had experienced, they will be afraid to lose high
amount
of money as per one time they
been caught
,
so
they will be afraid to lose high
amount
of money as per one time they
been caught
,
so
they
wil
try to not do anything
that is
misconduct or will
get
them into trouble for misbehaving.

In conclusion
, I am
strongly
agree
on increase the strength of the law to be powerful for the fine in order to encourage the society to be cleaner and
reduce
the pollution for the better and brighter future of new hope generation.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste

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