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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.31

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 31
It has been an ongoing debate for the garbage produced during the household chores are not recycled completely. However, some people perceive that the regime must impose the legal low which would raise the rubbish reclaiming process. I strongly support this point as it delivers the clean area and avoid the consequences of rubbish on the environment. To begin with, there are many factors due that many people support the authorities. The predominant reason is that the population has grown drastically in the recent times. As a result, the waste produced by performing housework would also be growing exponentially. However, there is limited system which recycles this waste; this would not be enough to deal with this elaboration. Moreover, this growing waste would create a health issue, as this will deliver some insects in the air which would generate the decease. For example, India, in the 90th century, many people were suffering from the AIDS, which would be the result of uncleanness atmosphere. Thus, the amount of waste produced, and its side effect forces many people to support this. Furthermore, by imposing this strengthen law the government serves the society in a better way. It will generate the awareness regarding the waste, this will forces the people to recycle the rubbish generated by them. At last, this would only be controlled by imposing the law and collect the money from the people who were not obeying the rules. The Regime will utilize this money to put the dustbin on the street to collect the rubbish. For instance, the authority can create awareness by starting the campaign such as “Swach Bharat”, this will deliver the information and tell them how to deal with waste. In conclusion, growing population would be considered as a main cause for the waste. I strongly support this view as the government should impose the law which creates the awareness and increase the recycling rate of the garbage.
It has been an ongoing debate for the garbage produced during the household chores are not recycled completely.
However
,
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some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
perceive that the regime
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
impose the legal low which would raise the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
reclaiming process. I
strongly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
support
this point as it delivers the clean area and avoid the consequences of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
on the environment.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
factors due that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
support
the authorities. The predominant reason is that the population has grown
drastically
in the recent times.
As a result
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
produced by performing housework would
also
be growing
exponentially
.
However
, there
is limited
system which recycles this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
; this would not be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to deal with this elaboration.
Moreover
, this growing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
would create a health issue, as this will deliver
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
insects in the air which would generate the decease.
For example
, India, in the 90th century,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
were suffering from the AIDS, which would be the result of uncleanness atmosphere.
Thus
, the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
produced, and its side effect forces
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
support
this.

Furthermore
, by imposing
The verb 'strengthen' is plural. Did you mean: "this strengthens"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this strengthen
law the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
serves the society in a better way. It will generate the awareness regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
, this will forces the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to recycle the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
generated by them. At last, this would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be controlled
by imposing the law and collect the money from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who were not obeying the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
. The Regime will utilize this money to put the dustbin on the street to collect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rubbish
.
For instance
, the authority can create awareness by starting the campaign such as “
Possible spelling mistake found.
Swach
Bharat”, this will deliver the information and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
them how to deal with waste.

In conclusion
, growing population would
be considered
as a main cause for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. I
strongly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
support
this view as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should impose the law which creates the awareness and increase the recycling rate of the garbage.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 31

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
321 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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