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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.30

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 30
Some people believe that garbage produced by households is not recycled in a proper amount. In this essay, I will explain why I think that by making it mandatory by law, this situation would improve. The first reason for taking legal measures is that laws make things happen, sadly willpower is not enough. For instance, many countries around the world apply the fines to companies that do not recycle their papers, ensuring not only this, but also decreasing the printers nonsense use. In addition, applying these legal requirements to every household would make the government offer a special recollection system to take these different types of waste to their respective treatment area. Take, for example, plastic waste in my country is utilized to build brooms and shovels and organics are used to produce fertilizers. Conversely, others believe that another strategy to make people recycle more is to have more environmental education at schools. Take, for instance, in Finland, children learn about this since kindergarten. Nevertheless, education is definitely not enough to make the society most considerate of the damage that the garbage produces, the government should be responsible for distributing specific buckets to put paper, plastic, organic waste and glass to every house, playground and company in town. In the Autonomous City of Buenos Aires, in this manner, there are green stations where citizens can get their bins the 24 hours of the day. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that apart from education, people need laws to behave correctly. Therefore, governments should apply fines and offer the tools needed to recycle and correctly transform the waste into practical products for society.
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Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that garbage produced by households is not recycled in a proper amount. In this essay, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that by making it mandatory by law, this situation would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
.

The
first
reason for taking legal measures is that laws
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
things happen,
sadly
willpower is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
.
For instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
countries around the world apply the fines to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
that do not recycle their papers, ensuring not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
this,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
decreasing the printers nonsense
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
.
In addition
, applying these legal requirements to every household would
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
offer a special recollection system to take these
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
to their respective treatment area. Take,
for example
, plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
in my country
is utilized
to build brooms and shovels and organics are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to produce fertilizers.

Conversely
, others believe that another strategy to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
recycle more is to have more environmental education at schools. Take,
for instance
, in Finland, children learn about this since kindergarten.
Nevertheless
, education is definitely not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
the society most considerate of the damage that the garbage produces, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should be responsible for distributing specific buckets to put paper, plastic, organic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and glass to every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, playground and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in town. In the Autonomous City of Buenos Aires, in this manner, there are green stations where citizens can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
their bins the 24 hours of the day.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion that apart from education,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
need laws to behave
correctly
.
Therefore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
should apply fines and offer the tools needed to recycle and
correctly
transform the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
into practical products for society.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 30

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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