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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.28

It is irrefutable that recycling, nowadays, is quite essential task in order to keep environment clean. A section of society believe that it is necessary for the government to enforce some strict rules and regulations which will helpful to make more recycle as at present people are not producing up to the mark recycling from home wastage. I, however, firmly agree with this notion and several reasons surround my opinion. To embark on, the first and foremost significant reason is that although individuals have started to recycle waste items, but it is up to some extent because some people become lazy as they find it boring and they do not consider it their regular routine work. Instead of reuse waste material to make some important useful things, they find quite easy to throw those wastage in garbage. A painstaking research has had undertaken which disclosed that currently only one-third population in India is taking seriously to recycle the waste things. Moving towards another reason, due to the hectic schedule of individuals, they skip to recycle things as they only focus on their task deadlines because owing to the influence of western culture everyone like to live in nuclear families rather than joint families. As a consequence, a couple have to manage not only office work, but also household chores which generally leads stressful life. Hence, they put this task into unessential category. In conclusion, I would reiterate my point of view that people will not recycle things property until they will not be forced by government.
It is irrefutable that recycling, nowadays, is quite essential task in order to
keep
environment clean. A section of society believe that it is necessary for the
government
to enforce
some
strict
rules
and regulations which will helpful to
make
more
recycle
as at present
people
are not producing up to the mark recycling from home wastage. I,
however
,
firmly
agree
with this notion and several reasons surround my opinion.

To embark on, the
first
and foremost significant reason is that although individuals have
started
to
recycle
waste items,
but
it is up to
some
extent
because
some
people
become lazy as they find it
boring and
they do not consider it their regular routine work.
Instead
of reuse waste material to
make
some
important
useful things, they find quite easy to throw
those wastage
in garbage. A painstaking research has had undertaken which disclosed that
currently
only
one-third population in India is taking
seriously
to
recycle
the waste things.

Moving towards another reason, due to the hectic schedule of individuals, they skip to
recycle
things as they
only
focus on their task deadlines
because
owing to the influence of western culture everyone like to
live
in nuclear families
rather
than joint families. As a consequence, a couple
have to
manage not
only
office work,
but
also
household chores which
generally
leads stressful life.
Hence
, they put this task into unessential category.

In conclusion
, I would reiterate my point of view that
people
will not
recycle
things property until they will not
be forced
by
government
.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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