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people believe that success is due to 10 percent of talent and 90 percent hard work. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. v.1

people believe that success is due to 10 percent of talent and 90 percent hard work. Give your opinion. v. 1
The definition of success varies among the people. Some individuals believe that, the major part of accomplishments are due to their hard work and the rest is talent. This essay will discuss that the factors that mainly contribute to becoming successful are a person's effort compared to their skill. In my opinion, working towards excellence consistently will definitely bear fruits irrespective of any talent. There is a popular belief that, anyone who has an inbuilt skill will surely excel in that field. This is because they can perform tasks related with complete ease compared to anyone else who wishes to learn. For example, a famous singer Mr. A R Rehmaan is considered as the best singer in the music industry because it is said that he talented to understand music. Hence, a skilled person may not struggle to as compared to someone who is learning the skill. Despite all these factors, I believe that if continuous efforts are put to learn, it will always supersede any talent. Even if someone has the capability but does not put any effort it may never show results. On the contrary, with the help of constant practice, expertise in any field can be gained. For instance, Albert Einstein a well-known scientist was never talented but, is a known genius for his consistent efforts in Physics. Therefore, all this proves that hard work can definitely beat any gifted individual in any aspect of life. To conclude, there are many methods to become successful. Some argue that it is important to have the art while others say it is dependent on the consistent work. I opine that, without consistency any form of inborn skills will not reap success.
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individuals believe that, the major part of accomplishments are due to their
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hard
work and the rest is talent. This essay will discuss that the factors that
mainly
contribute to becoming successful are a person's
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effort
compared to their
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skill
. In my opinion, working towards excellence
consistently
will definitely bear fruits irrespective of any talent.

There is a popular belief that, anyone who has an inbuilt
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skill
will
surely
excel in that field. This is
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because
they can perform tasks related with complete
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ease
compared to anyone else who wishes to learn.
For example
, a
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famous
singer Mr. A R
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Rehmaan
is considered
as the best singer in the music industry
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because
it
is said
that
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he
talented to understand music.
Hence
, a skilled person may not struggle to as compared to someone who is learning the
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skill
.

Despite all these factors, I believe that if continuous
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efforts
are put
to learn, it will always supersede any talent. Even if someone has the capability
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but
does not put any
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effort
it may never
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show
results.
On the contrary
, with the
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help
of constant practice, expertise in any field can
be gained
.
For instance
, Albert Einstein a well-known scientist was never talented
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but
, is a known genius for his consistent
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efforts
in Physics.
Therefore
, all this proves that
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hard
work can definitely beat any gifted individual in any aspect of life.

To conclude
, there are
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many
methods to become successful.
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Some
argue that it is
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important
to have the art while others say it is dependent on the consistent work. I opine that, without consistency any form of inborn
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skills
will not reap success.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay people believe that success is due to 10 percent of talent and 90 percent hard work. Give your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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