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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was v.19

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 19
Living in such an ever-changing society, the attitude toward literacy, which defined as the ability to read and write is also changing. Specifically, some experts assert that such capacity is much more important than the past. As far as I concerned, I agree that literacy capability is the indispensable characteristics that the public should equip with. This essay will elaborate the reasons in detail. First of all, it is the way that we connect to others and it is also the essential foundation of education. One can barely survive in the fast-pacing world without literacy power. To give an illustration of lacking this vital competence, it definitely would make people cannot catch up with the latest information so that they cannot help but fall behind others in such a competitive world. In addition, as the saying goes: ” learning is a lifelong virtue. ” Only by this ability can we absorb the innovative knowledge independently without relying on others. The second point to make is related to the technology development, especially the Internet which dwindling of boundaries of knowledge. That is to say, people are having an easier access to explosive information. It is not only about the reading and writing, but also about comprehension and interpretation. It is inevitable that the cultivation of literacy is the fundamental for the public. For example, everyone is bombarded with all sorts of information from anywhere, such as Facebook, Instagram, and TV. However, to what extent we can trust the sources mentioned above? If someone cannot separate fact from fiction, he/she is possible to be controlled by the fake news or misinformation without consciousness. To sum up, it appears inevitable that the overall trend toward playing emphasis on literacy. I support that literal capability is so crucial that if everyone could equip with this skill that would lead them a better way to connect with the world.
Living in such an ever-changing society, the attitude toward
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literacy
, which defined as the ability to read and write is
also
changing.
Specifically
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
experts assert that such capacity is much more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
than the past. As far as I concerned, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literacy
capability is the indispensable characteristics that the public should equip with. This essay will elaborate the reasons in detail.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it is the way that we connect to others and it is
also
the essential foundation of education. One can
barely
survive in the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
-pacing world without
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literacy
power. To give an illustration of lacking this vital competence, it definitely would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
cannot catch up with the latest information
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
fall behind others in such a competitive world.
In addition
, as the saying goes:
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”
learning is a lifelong virtue. ”
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Only
by this ability can we absorb the innovative knowledge
independently
without relying on others.

The second point to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
is related
to the technology development,
especially
the Internet which dwindling of boundaries of knowledge.
That is
to say,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are having an easier access to explosive information. It is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
about the reading and writing,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
about comprehension and interpretation. It is inevitable that the cultivation of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literacy
is the fundamental for the public.
For example
, everyone
is bombarded
with all sorts of information from anywhere, such as Facebook, Instagram, and TV.
However
, to what extent we can trust the sources mentioned above? If someone cannot separate fact from fiction, he/she is possible to
be controlled
by the fake news or misinformation without consciousness.

To sum up, it appears inevitable that the
overall
trend toward playing emphasis on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
literacy
. I support that literal capability is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
crucial that if everyone could equip with this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
that would lead them a better way to connect with the world.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 19

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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