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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.16

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 16
In earlier days, household or domestic waste was not recycled at all. With the increase in population, waste generation increased day-by-day and the dumping grounds began filling up steadily, leading to the concept of recycling. Nowadays recycling has become a necessity for better sustainability of resources. In many countries, laws are made just so that people get the reason to follow something. Same is the case with recycling. Due to lack of awareness or difficulty in recycling, people are not willing to recycle. Government should make laws to force the people to recycle more and even fine them if they do not. Laws will make it easier for people to get into businesses of collecting litter from homes and recycling, thereby leading to employment as well. I have seen laws being implemented and people change if not very soon but gradually over the years. The Government implemented laws are always favoured by some and not so much by others. To make people recycle more, they should be made aware and taught how to segregate their household waste. Unaware or illiterate people may be likely to oppose laws thinking it may harm them in some way or the other. The ruling government’s opposition will find ways to make the laws as a way of corruption. I agree that laws should be implemented and along with it awareness programmes have to be launched by the government to increase recycling. The laws should be aided with assigning a newly formed department for the same reason. People will have to believe in the initiative, but in fact, drive them, to help their home country for a better sustainable future.
In earlier days, household or domestic waste was not recycled at all. With the increase in population, waste generation increased day-by-day and the dumping grounds began filling up
steadily
, leading to the concept of
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recycling
. Nowadays
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recycling
has become a necessity for better sustainability of resources.

In
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many
countries,
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laws
are made
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just
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so
that
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people
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get
the reason to follow something. Same is the case with
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recycling
. Due to lack of awareness or difficulty in
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recycling
,
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people
are not willing to recycle.
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Government
should
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make
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laws
to force the
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people
to recycle more and even fine them if they do not.
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Laws
will
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make
it easier for
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people
to
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get
into businesses of collecting litter from homes and
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recycling
, thereby leading to employment
as well
. I have
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seen
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laws
being implemented
and
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people
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change
if not
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very
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soon
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but
gradually
over the years.

The
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Government
implemented
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laws
are always
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favoured
by
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some
and not
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so
much by others. To
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make
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people
recycle more, they should
be made
aware and taught how to segregate their household waste. Unaware or illiterate
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people
may be likely to oppose
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laws
thinking it may harm them in
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some
way or the other. The ruling
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government’s
opposition will find ways to
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make
the
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laws
as a way of corruption.

I
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agree
that
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laws
should
be implemented
and along with it awareness
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programmes
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have to
be launched
by the
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government
to increase
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recycling
. The
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laws
should
be aided
with assigning a
newly
formed department for the same reason.
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People
will
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have to
believe in the initiative,
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but
in fact, drive them, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
their home country for a better sustainable future.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 16

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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