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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people more of their waste? v.3

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 3
Nowadays, concerns about recycling is on the rise. Lots of people argue that government interference is the only way to enforce people recycle more of their waste. However, it is disagreed that the only way to boost recycling depends on the authority's decision about making it an obligation. In my opinion, government interference is one of the most efficient ways possible as well as opening learning centres and making advertisements. Firstly, governments can open learning centres in order to educate its citizens about the benefits of recycling and its process. For example, it is generally agreed that opening an education centre could lead people to put more of their wastes into recycling bins, since they would be aware of the benefits of recycling such as its contribution to energy production and therefore, the country’s economy. Thus, this makes it clear that government interference is not the only approach in terms of encouraging people to recycle more of their trash. Secondly, making advertisements about recycling would be an efficient action to inform people about the disastrous effects of recycling less. For instance, it is widely known that an increasing amount of wastes could cause pollution, which can prevented by just making attractive and informing advertisements. As well as education centres, advertisements can encourage people to put more of their wastes in recycling bins. In addition, it is much more preferable due to its cost effectiveness. Therefore, it becomes apparent that making recycling a legal requirement is not the only action for governments to increase it. To sum up, rather than making recycling a requirement, governments can open education centres and make public advertisements to educate its citizens in order to boost recycling. So, it is clear that there are other ways for governments to increase recycling. Thus, I contradict any idea that suggests making recycling a legal requirement is the only way to increase it.
Nowadays, concerns about
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recycling
is on the rise. Lots of
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people
argue that
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government
interference is the
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only
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way
to enforce
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people
recycle more of their
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waste
.
However
, it
is disagreed
that the
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only
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way
to boost
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recycling
depends on the authority's decision about making it an obligation. In my opinion,
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government
interference is one of the most efficient
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ways
possible
as well
as opening learning
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centres
and making advertisements.

Firstly
,
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governments
can open learning
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centres
in order to educate its citizens about the benefits of
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recycling
and its process.
For example
, it is
generally
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agreed
that opening an education
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centre
could lead
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people
to put more of their
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wastes
into
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recycling
bins, since they would be aware of the benefits of
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recycling
such as its contribution to energy production and
therefore
, the country’s economy.
Thus
, this
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makes
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that
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government
interference is not the
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only
approach in terms of encouraging
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people
to recycle more of their trash.

Secondly
, making
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advertisements
about
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recycling
would be an efficient action to inform
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people
about the disastrous effects of
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recycling
less.
For instance
, it is
widely
known that an increasing amount of
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wastes
could cause pollution, which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
by
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just
making attractive and informing
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advertisements
.
As well
as education
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centres
,
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advertisements
can encourage
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people
to put more of their
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wastes
in
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recycling
bins.
In addition
, it is much more preferable due to its
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cost effectiveness
.
Therefore
, it becomes apparent that making
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recycling
a legal requirement is not the
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only
action for
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governments
to increase it.

To sum up,
rather
than making
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recycling
a requirement,
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governments
can open education
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centres
and
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make
public
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advertisements
to educate its citizens in order to boost
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recycling
.
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So
, it is
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clear
that there are other
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ways
for
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governments
to increase
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recycling
.
Thus
, I contradict any
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idea
that suggests making
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recycling
a legal requirement is the
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only
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way
to increase it.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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