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Some people claim that having own car brings problem. Do you agree or disagree?

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Many people have their own car to convenient for them to go to work. However, it is a common belief that owning a car brings a lot of problems to many people. In my opinion, I partly agree with view for several reasons. Having a car is indeed comfortable and convenient to go everywhere we want. We can go any time and we do not make annoyed to anybody for the own time. We can take friends or family to go with us so that we can have a good time with them. On the other hand, some places do not have parking and we can find the parking far away from the place we get. Sometimes the car has to fix and maintained, it makes us spend a lot of money and time to do this. In conclusion, sometimes having a car make us annoyed but they are really useful for a lot of people to go to work.
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with view for several reasons.

Having a
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we do not
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IELTS essay Some people claim that having own car brings problem.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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