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Average cost of housings

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The above bar chart provide information about cost of housing, in the year 1990 and 2000 respectively. Overall, we can see that the cost of housing was lowest in rural area followed by highest in urban area, from the year 1990 to 2000. In the year 1990, the average cost of housing in the rural area was 75000 dollar, however we can see that there was just a difference of 25000 dollar for the cost of housing in the suburban area. During this year the highest cost of hosing was in the urban area, which was 150000 dollar. In the year 2000, the cost of housing just skyrocketed to around 300000 dollar in the urban area, and suburban was just 25000 dollar lower than that of urban area. The cost of housing in the rural area was increase in 2000 as compare to the year of 1990, where as, it was still the lowest as comae to other areas.
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, from the
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1990 to 2000.

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1990, the average
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IELTS essay Average cost of housings

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
159 words
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