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some people choose career for social status when others choose for enjoyment

some people choose career for social status when others choose for enjoyment XyBEO

Choosing career highlights the fact that at the age of 17-18 people must know what they want to accomplish until they die. Peers desire great amount of salary, some of them doesn’t even acknowledge their interests. As a result they suffer through their lives. Social status and salary may give them pride and feeling of achievement, but not joy. In this day and age, nothing is impossible. Anything that makes us feel enthusiastic and fulfilled can be used as a job. Working without amusement is unpleasant, which may be source of our negative energy and stress as well. I’ve had a lot of trouble choosing career path, was lost in little world of mine and nobody could bare with my aspiration. Between social status and pleasure, I went for a second option, and this was the best decision I’ve ever made. I felt furtuitous to have found my own place in this world.

Choosing career highlights the fact that at the age of 17-18 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 know what they want to accomplish until they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
. Peers desire great amount of salary, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of them doesn’t even acknowledge their interests. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result they suffer through their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. Social status and salary may give them pride and feeling of achievement, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not joy.

In this day and age, nothing is impossible. Anything that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us feel enthusiastic and fulfilled can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as a job. Working without amusement is unpleasant, which may be Consider using a past participle here: "sourced".sourced
source
 of our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 energy and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
as well
.

I’ve had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 trouble choosing career path, was lost
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 world of mine and nobody could This form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
bare
 with my aspiration. Between social status and pleasure, I went for a second option, and this was the best decision I’ve ever made. I felt Possible spelling mistake found.fortuitous
furtuitous
 to have found my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 place in this world. 