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Some people belive that it is good to share information as possible in scientific Research, Business and the academic worlds. Other believe that some information is to important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Nowadays information sharing is a huge issue across the globe. In addition to this word have its own significance and value, Its varies from person to person. A group of people feels that instruction sharing has a beneficial impact on business and academic industries, while another group believes that secret and vital knowledge cannot be disclosed openly. In this essay, I will discuss the point of view of both parties. Some People think that sharing information and personal experience, Will help the economic growth of the country. For example, Scientist and Businessmen share instruction and their personal experiences with peoples, to help them resolve a scientific problem or construct a business model. Other groups believe that sharing confidential intelligence openly is a crime, that will allow your enemy to make counter-strategies against you. This will lead the country towards destruction, where your enemy is well-prepared against you, merely in light of the fact that of that word which you floated publically. In my opinion, sharing instruction is good for the economic growth of the country. Despite the fact, that sharing confidential advice is a crime and led the country towards destruction. Classification of knowledge is required, and it should be regulated by the government.
Nowadays information
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sharing
is a huge issue across the globe.
In addition
to this word have its
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own
significance and value, Its varies from person to person. A group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
feels that instruction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sharing
has a beneficial impact on business and academic industries, while another group believes that secret and vital knowledge cannot
be disclosed
openly
. In this essay, I will discuss the point of view of both parties.

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Some
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People
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think
that
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sharing
information and personal experience, Will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the economic growth of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
For example
, Scientist and Businessmen share instruction and their personal experiences with peoples, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them resolve a scientific problem or construct a business model.

Other groups believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sharing
confidential intelligence
openly
is a crime, that will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
your enemy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
counter-strategies against you. This will lead the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
towards destruction, where your enemy is well-prepared against you,
merely
in light of the fact that of that word which you floated
publically
.

In my opinion,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sharing
instruction is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for the economic growth of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. Despite the fact, that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sharing
confidential advice is a crime and led the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
towards destruction. Classification of knowledge
is required
, and it should
be regulated
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.
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IELTS essay Some people belive that it is good to share information as possible in scientific Research, Business and the academic worlds. Other believe that some information is to important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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204 words
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