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Lots of choices available in market some people think that it is good while other think that it is not good discuss both views

To commence with my views, I reckon that nowadays numerous choices is very fruitful, first and foremost technology become an integral part of our lives. it provides different amenties that is greatly helpful for us. We can broaden the horizons with Internet instead of reading books information is given in different ways like audio and video. we need just type and click the button and we can get every kind of knowledge. secondly, individuals can choose different occupations according to their skills people have wide range of education facilities. many institutions, schools, colleges and universities are available as well as jobs. people sell duplicate products to the public.
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helpful for us. We can broaden the horizons with Internet
instead
of reading books information is
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given
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different
ways like audio and video.
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we
need
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type and click the
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button and
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get
every kind of knowledge.
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secondly
, individuals can choose
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different
occupations according to their
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skills
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people
have wide range of education facilities.
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many
institutions, schools, colleges and universities are available
as well
as jobs.
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people
sell duplicate products to the public.

IELTS essay Lots of choices available in market some people think that it is good while other think that it is not good discuss both views

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108 words
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