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Some people belive that environmental problems are urgent. Other people think it is normal. Discuss both views

Some people belive that environmental problems are urgent. Other people think it is normal. Discuss both views Og9dE
Nowadays people faced with ecological problems, urgent ecological problems. THERE ARE SEVERAL PROBLEMS for instance; water pollution, air pollution, destruction of the ozone layer, endangered flora and faunaetc. The problem with the environment becomes relevant. Currently, there is a solution to these problems. Some people who appreciate nature have a good influence on nature. Thus, people saved world. Despite of impact those societies, also have a people who destroy, it will be covered in this essay. Humanity have a lot of problems with environment that societies regret, namely it is air pollution. A most part of oxygenwas disappearing owing of hazardous waste of cars. Gases takes up most of deterioration ozone layer. How well we know that ozone layer protects societies from dangers. If humanity lose most ozone layer this will affect the mankind. Admittedly, scientistssays, most of societies used cars. Also, because of cars a lot of people die. What’s more, the mankind will be in danger. Moreover, our planet can destroy, because of radiation of sun, I’d say mankind. Moreover, same situation happened. One clear example is the solar storm of 2012 or Eruption of the Toba supervolcano 75 thousand years ago. Humanity was survivehuge losseswith ecological. Nevertheless, people have decision, it’s consist of less use cars and more use bicycles or TESLA CARS (electric cars), on the other hand it is responsible, furthermore good for your health when societies ride in bicycles, that’s useful while humanity use cars produce dander gases. But also, humanity faced with another problem, it’s consist of garbage pollution. People can replace places, that starving with garbage pollution. There humanity can add windmill. In my view that’s useful, otherwise, there may be a fire. But nowadays societies used wind energy It’s more responsible and great for environment owing to wind energy people produce energy. In conclusion I would say, humanity can destroy mankind and cannot destroy. If people will work for prosperity life we can save nature and getting better results than before it was.
Nowadays
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people
faced with ecological
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problems
, urgent ecological
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problems
. THERE ARE SEVERAL
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PROBLEMS
for instance
; water
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pollution
, air
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pollution
, destruction of the ozone
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layer
, endangered flora and
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faunaetc
. The
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problem
with the environment becomes relevant.
Currently
, there is a solution to these
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problems
.
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Some
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people
who appreciate nature have a
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good
influence on nature.
Thus
,
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people
saved world.
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Despite of
impact those
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societies
,
also
have a
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people
who
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destroy
, it will
be covered
in this essay.

Humanity
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have
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a lot of
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problems
with environment that
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societies
regret,
namely
it is air
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pollution
. A most part of
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oxygenwas
disappearing owing of hazardous waste of
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cars
.
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Gases takes
up
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most of deterioration
ozone
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layer
. How well we know that ozone
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layer
protects
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societies
from
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dangers
.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
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humanity
lose most ozone
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layer
this will affect the
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mankind
.
Admittedly
,
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scientistssays
, most of
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societies
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used
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cars
.
Also
,
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because
of
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cars
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a lot of
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people
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die
.

What’s more, the
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mankind
will be in
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danger
.
Moreover
, our planet can
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destroy
,
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because
of radiation of sun, I’d say
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mankind
.
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Moreover
, same situation happened. One
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clear
example is the solar storm of 2012 or Eruption of the
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Toba
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supervolcano
75 thousand years ago.
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Humanity
was
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survivehuge
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losseswith
ecological.
Nevertheless
,
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people
have decision, it’s consist of less
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use
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cars
and more
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use
bicycles or TESLA
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CARS
(electric
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cars)
,
on the other hand
it is responsible,
furthermore
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good
for your health when
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societies
ride in bicycles, that’s useful while
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humanity
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use
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cars
produce dander gases.

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But
also
,
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humanity
faced with another
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problem
, it’s consist of garbage
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pollution
.
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People
can replace places, that starving with garbage
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pollution
. There
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humanity
can
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add
windmill. In my view that’s useful,
otherwise
, there may be a fire.
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But
nowadays
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societies
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used
wind energy It’s more responsible and great for environment owing to wind energy
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people
produce energy.

In
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conclusion I
would say,
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humanity
can
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destroy
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mankind
and cannot
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destroy
. If
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people
will work for prosperity life we can save nature and getting better results than
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before
it was.
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IELTS essay Some people belive that environmental problems are urgent. Other people think it is normal. Discuss both views

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