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Disadvantages of self employment

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Now a days people are self employed and we can see more number of companies in our society which are emerged with basic goals. The corporate world only welcomes talented personalities which may not employ certain people who are not up to their standards. Some talented people won't like to work under someone who don't care about their employees So, they want to start a small company and they can provide employment. Their might be several risk factors bothering the company but, some stood up and stayed strong by solving the issues.
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IELTS essay Disadvantages of self employment

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  American English
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