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Some people believe they should keep all the they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree. v.2

Some people believe they should keep all the they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. v. 2
Long before, each country’s government has brought comprehensive taxation system. The system was formed in such a way that the government can eventually disburse funds via various policies, to the needed citizens. However, some people believe that they should keep all the hard earned money without paying taxes and save as much amount as possible. Despite this belief by the most, I strongly support the notion to pay taxes. Two strong reasons to hold on this belief are: government financially supports minority people or society which is in dire needs, the government also supports to improve infrastructure of respective nation. Most of the people are in a dilemma that what the governments are doing with all these taxation money. In fact, it has been introducing various policies for different sectors such as health insurance, property related policies, and other policies related to natural catastrophes. When any of this predicament occurs either to individuals, to the society and or to the specific region then the government can utilize this funds to recover losses. For example, the American government keeps taxation money as their treasury resource and helps individuals by disbursing partial amount while they are ill. Additionally, the government also helps economically backward classes to pay some fixed amount to survive. Finally, this fund has been utilizing when any natural calamities happen, just to recover the loss of property and infrastructure. Taxation money can be used to improve the overall infrastructure of the nation. All the government is using taxation' s money to build public facilities like government hospitals, recreational centers, and many others. The government also using this money to provide better transportation facilities to the citizens. For example, the Indian government is managing and fulfilling the country’s citizens’ needs from this monetary resource. This resource is actually the sum of the individuals' tax submission. So, ultimately people are getting their money back as the facilities which are provided by the government. To conclude, paying taxes is not only one’s responsibility but also their duty towards the nation. People having this mindset should take all this into consideration, otherwise, days are numbered that the government would not offer any of the support to their countrymen.
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before
, each country’s
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government
has brought comprehensive
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taxation
system. The system
was formed
in such a way that the
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government
can
eventually
disburse funds via various
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policies
, to the needed citizens.
However
,
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some
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people
believe that they should
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keep
all the
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hard earned
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money
without paying
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taxes
and save as much amount as possible. Despite this belief by the most, I
strongly
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support
the notion to pay
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taxes
. Two strong reasons to hold on this belief are:
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government
financially
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supports
minority
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people
or society which is in dire needs, the
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government
also
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supports
to
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improve
infrastructure of respective nation.

Most of the
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people
are in a dilemma that what the
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governments
are doing with all these
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taxation
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money
. In fact, it has been introducing various
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policies
for
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different
sectors such as health insurance, property related
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policies
, and other
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policies
related to natural catastrophes. When any of this predicament occurs either to individuals, to the society and or to the specific region then the
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government
can utilize this funds to recover losses.
For example
, the American
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government
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keeps
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taxation
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money
as their treasury resource and
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helps
individuals by disbursing partial amount while they are ill.
Additionally
, the
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government
also
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helps
economically
backward classes to pay
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some
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fixed
amount to survive.
Finally
, this fund has been utilizing when any natural calamities happen,
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just
to recover the loss of property and infrastructure.

Taxation
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money
can be
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used
to
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improve
the
overall
infrastructure of the nation. All the
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government
is using
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taxation&
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money
to build public facilities like
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government
hospitals, recreational centers, and
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many
others. The
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government
also
using this
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money
to provide better transportation facilities to the citizens.
For example
, the Indian
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government
is managing and fulfilling the country’s citizens’ needs from this monetary resource. This resource is actually the sum of the
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individuals&
#039;
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tax
submission.
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So
,
ultimately
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people
are getting their
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money
back as the facilities which
are provided
by the
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government
.

To conclude
, paying
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taxes
is not
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only
one’s responsibility
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but
also
their duty towards the nation.
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People
having this mindset should take all this into consideration,
otherwise
, days
are numbered
that the
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government
would not offer any of the
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support
to their countrymen.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
41Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people believe they should keep all the they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
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