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Some people believe the real teacher's will be replaced by robots and pre recorded lessons

Some people believe the real teacher's will be replaced by robots and pre recorded lessons nEDmg
Some peaple support the idea of replacing profecers and school educators with pre recorded lessons and bots i disagree with them. In my opinion studants who attend pre recorded lessons will not be able to ask or discuss the lesson like they used to do when they take lessons with real teachers, for example students who take art class look at arts with different perspectives and different opinions and each student has his own questions to ask but the prerecorded video doesn't cover all the topics and doesn't answer all the questions it only covers the major idea of the class
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IELTS essay Some people believe the real teacher's will be replaced by robots and pre recorded lessons

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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